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  • Rasifer_Chlornass
    Rasifer_Chlornass1yr
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    I'm not sure but I feel like everyone wants the Demon Lord dead....but, have we thought about Eisbeth's point of view? The so-called Demon Lord wants to access Akashic's records so that he can find a reason to live, his reason for being, the value of his life and other questions...but in the chapter "Awakening" he said that Rin's eyes are different from those of Ben, and then we understood that the Demon Lord's eyes are similar to Ben's. .. the reason? Because they both remember their memories from each trial. Both of them lost their emotions. I bet Eisbeth can no longer take care of anything that befalls demons. However, he had previously managed to make demons the strongest race ever. This simply means that he initially wanted to access the Akashic Records for the sake of himself and his entire race. but now? Perhaps Eisbeth would have lost his desire to fulfill this dream had he not met the evil Rin. And he became consoling himself that he was not the only one who did not want to live. And if we take a closer look, we find that Eisbeth is not just an alternate character of the last villain. 1 . Even if Rin defeats Eisbeth, how will he kill him, and Kevin has always been much weaker than Eisbeth, doesn't this mean that Eisbeth will eventually die at the hands of someone who can't even defeat him? After all the effort and pain the Demon Lord went through? How could Eisbeth accept this? 2. We all know that Rin's evil eyes are the eyes of someone who wants to die but can't, if Eisbeth's eyes are so similar to him that Eisbeth considers the evil Rin almost his sworn brother because of that....Doesn't that mean that Eisbeth also had a lot of suffering ? The fact that he is still able to smile and laugh is something the author often adds to express Eisbeth as someone who does not reveal his emotions and feelings to anyone. 3. Do you not find Eisbeth's past questionable? He lost his family and friends, was humiliated and hated and treated like a bug because he was a demon, then suddenly found the seed of a planet in the box that his parents gave him.... From here he will begin his quest to find Akashic records and find answers to his questions...But... This in and of itself is suspicious! Couldn't the Akashic records detect that a certain person had started to become extremely powerful? And why will records prevent him from reaching an answer to this extent? The records were willing to let him destroy the whole world except for Earth because Kevin is there. If only Kevin would have chosen to kill Eisbeth after Rin defeated him in that incident. Wouldn't that mean that in exchange for Moth Isbeth, the Akashic Records would be willing to sacrifice every living creature in this world? 4 . The evil Rin said that Kevin was "created" to care and prioritize his friends, and that he was created to kill the Demon Lord. Doesn't that mean that Akashic Records has permanently set a character in Kevin's ruth? Couldn't you have done the same with Eisbeth? Basically, isn't it weird that the Akashic Chronicles have enough power to make an infinite cycle of lives for Kevin, Rin, and Eisbeth? However, she couldn't finish it simply and easily... If the Red Book was indeed made by Akashic Records, why didn't you give it to Rin from the start, you only stepped in when Rin couldn't do much anymore....as if she was supporting an entertainment company to continue a certain show.... Don't you all think that the real enemy here is the Akashic Records? Even the memories that Kevin can retrieve are memories of Rin being a villain....This is simply an instigation to prevent the cycle from ending. Didn't Isabeth say that Planetary Seeds are basically a very small part of the Akashic Records? Is the Demon Lord’s fault here that he “dared to try to touch the feet of the Akashic Records?” The evil Hatter Rin considers himself a chess piece for someone to play with, apparently referring to the Akashic Records. I hope you will take my theory into consideration... The ending of this novel will surely be great. Thanks for you!!

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    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • Rasifer_Chlornass
    Rasifer_Chlornass1yr
    Commented

    👏😮 wooooooow!

    Ch 47 CHAPTER 44 – Fighting the Fire Lizardman Champion
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    The Novel's Extra's Extra
    Book&Literature · dvelasquez
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  • Rasifer_Chlornass
    Rasifer_Chlornass1yr
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    I'm so shocked, I was wondering why the writer didn't publish the chapters in Lucas' novel, but in fact he was stupid enough to write a second novel! And a harem novel! Such a thing would only be done by a fool who wants to increase his reading! I can accept that professional writers will write two novels at once, the writer of the descent of dimensions is a good example of that, his level is very good, the plots of the story are excellent, he has great ideas, he is a professional and that is why it is okay to divide his focus on two works.... but the writer of a survival novel The add-on is just a hobbyist! He did something very stupid, if he had focused more on his first novels it would have been better, I'm sure he was arrogant after he got some credit, but he has already crossed the line.... Personally, I am very critical of what he did.

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    The Extra's Survival
    Fantasy · Mohitkumar
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  • Rasifer_Chlornass
    Rasifer_Chlornass1yr
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    Ah, for a novel that lacks followers, it is better to increase the number of free chapters to a point where the quality of chapters improves significantly, and thus the prospects of the novel will increase, I personally am not ready to buy chapters from a novel that does not have a real place in my heart.... This is just advice to the author, I hope You understand my intention and thank you for your hard work.

    Ch 50 Black Market [2]
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    The Author is an Extra, The MC is a Reincarnator
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  • Rasifer_Chlornass
    Rasifer_Chlornass1yr
    Commented

    Next chapters??

    Ch 1052 Interrupted Negotiation
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    Prime Originator
    Fantasy · Pointbreak
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  • Rasifer_Chlornass
    Rasifer_Chlornass1yr
    Replied to SomDxD

    More Chapters????? 145??

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    Parallel Memory
    Fantasy · SomDxD
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  • Rasifer_Chlornass
    Rasifer_Chlornass1yr
    Commented

    Honestly, the novel is very good, it has a lot of potential for growth, but there is one problem....Reading one chapter every twenty-four hours is simply killing the passion of the readers, I'm not sure what you think sir writer, but I hope you write two chapters every day, this Also because one chapter does not contain many events... And frankly, I would prefer you to increase the length of the chapter, most readers feel more comfortable when there are chapters that are a little long, and this will solve the problem of few events, in the end I hope you will excuse me in case I was rude Or you think I interfere in your affairs, I'm so sorry! But I love this work and I just wanted to express an issue that I found urgent.....Thank you for your continued writing.

    Ch 127 I Believe You!
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    Parallel Memory
    Fantasy · SomDxD
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  • Rasifer_Chlornass
    Rasifer_Chlornass1yr
    Posted

    Respected author, I want to thank you for writing this masterpiece, I am very happy that I did not disappoint with this novel...But frankly, I think there is room to improve the story further, there are many characters that are still mysterious, and I can't feel that they have Her stories, Rin's parents for example, we know almost nothing about them, I feel that their reason for being is to be his parents, that's just... I don't understand how he could have been today, I end up asking questions like: “How did Melissa end up being what she is today?”, “Who are the members of the Federation?” I feel like there is a lot waiting for this novel, and I really want to see the end... no matter what it is. Author, I have decided to rate the novel with five stars so that I wish you good luck in your journey to develop this novel

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    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • Rasifer_Chlornass
    Rasifer_Chlornass1yr
    Commented

    I mean no offense, and I have no ill intent... But I will say frankly that the story needs some logic.... Perhaps it would be nice for Adam to come to his senses and you could make the story a romantic comedy in a world of magic, adventures and conspiracies Maybe then I'll be able to read a chapter without hitting my face...LoL

    Ch 8 Descent To The End (4)
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    Deranged Writer's Afterword (will be republished)
    Fantasy · Carrot_Dude
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  • Rasifer_Chlornass
    Rasifer_Chlornass1yr
    Commented

    Wooow!!

    Ch 21 The Elves are Coming Back
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    Author Got an SSS Class to Fight His Own MC
    Fantasy · Herolich
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