joefoolish

As many have said in reviews, at about chapter 200 this basically becomes a different story. This story has other issues, like characters being referred to with the wrong pronouns, or characters suddenly being called something else with little to no explanation. Those issues were fine to me, nothing too big, but the chapter 200 story thing is a gigantic problem. I wish I had read some of the reviews first so I wouldn't have fallen for this. Don't spend money on this story because it won't last, and we shouldn't encourage this.

Decent system/cultivation story that desperately needs an actual editor or proof reader. Lots of small writing issues, like terms for cultivation realm or characters pronouns not being consistent. While the story is entertaining, you can find better elsewhere. Go spend your money on something better.