PeachMonarch

mmmmmm I get this is a fanfic but two things so far 1. no way anyone would by almost 50% sync to aizen and not have conquer haki that guy's willpower is absurd he believes he will replace god. 2. ain't no way 50% aizen is only shikai lol

feel like this is missing some stuff. can still make sense of it but just feels wrong.

oooooo thats cool too. develops the planet too upgrad to higher level we now cultivating boys.

bro just like blue balling us

was this barely 200 words or something. dude you gotta make longer chapters and actually progress the story. nothings happened all week because we barely got a normal chapter all together. your gonna loose everyone whos interested in this fic doing this. I get you wanna promote your paetron and make money but im starting to feel like you stole this book and only have x chapters so your cutting it up to milk it.