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Gaming_Account_54691yrPostedok, now I've read everything available and this is my second review so I won't repeat myself, I haven't been disappointed when reading this and I still find this one of the best reads on this site. All I've got are some cool adds I've would've liked to see 1. I would've liked to see more of the other hosts perspectives in some of the situations they were put in. Mainly after once Damon leaves hell (example the host of life vs the pope) would've been amazing to see what sort of feelings he was going through when fighting (the man did kill his brother after all). This is why I found the battle when Damon revealing himself to be the coolest in this novel (great job on that battle by the way👌) 2. Please fill the five year gap when Damon was in hell with what happened to his friends, how the Duke recovered mentally, or any sort of impact he left on the characters. I mentioning this because because I thought this would be great for a couple of bonus chapters in the future if u ever fill like making them 3. add blinks backstory, I know it's said in the story but the events he's put through could've hit harder if there was more context to their relationship. I'm mainly talking about his village being attacked. that's it, again none of this is criticism, just suggestions for the future because I really loved this novel and I am gonna start reading more of your works
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error... I think? (I was going (on leg) gather)
"I was going on leg them gather so we can fight a single decisive battle but I guess I will have to start picking them off one after the other…" Damon said coldly. - Gaming_Account_54691yrCommented
I do like Lucy but...
He knew Gin wasn't too fond of her but there was nothing he could do about it. He couldn't pick a side since he considered Gin, Cyrus, and Damon just as important as Lucy in his life, if not more. - Gaming_Account_54691yrCommented
it will be cool to see how they grow in the future because I've always had the belief the the elements were equal in power
"I know what you are thinking and I have a simple question to ask. Do you really think you can survive in this world with such cowardice? When Damon fought against the four great armies did he have any gear on him? We are both guardian spirit hosts and I refuse to believe we are inferior…. I suggest you act like a future true God or slit your throat right now and get it over with!" Gin sensed Cyrus' thoughts and felt disgusted. - Gaming_Account_54691yrCommented
but won't the old man's soul return to the cosmic spirit if he dies?
"I guess I will have to kill the old man!" Damon muttered with a slight frown. - Gaming_Account_54691yrCommentedAt first, Elsa was stunned and didn't know how to react but Damon's tongue invaded her mouth, giving her an immense warm feeling. Her body shivered as she tightened her grip on Damon and pushed him away before falling to the ground on her butt. Her eyes filled with confusion and questions but she couldn't find the words to ask.
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YES! he finally realised. am I the only one who thought the hosts really only needed each other
After pondering about everything that needs to be done and how to go about them, Damon finally got his answer. He had no reason to join any side or have any side back him. With the power of death, he could create an army of his own by fighting battles. The battlefield is the perfect place for a cultivator like him who feeds on souls. - Gaming_Account_54691yrCommented
lol "frow" 😆
"This will be a major problem" Damon said with a frow - Gaming_Account_54691yrReplied to PhantomFalcon
maybe the longer they develope (age) the more their soul grows or its to keep the story more interesting
Amongst all the souls he took control of Kyle could be considered the most important one. - Gaming_Account_54691yrReplied to PhantomFalcon
probably lieing to make it sound cooler to the enemy
"With a single glance, I could already tell I didn't have the means to beat you. The confidence in your eyes is one built for at least a century but for someone like me who has barely lived two decades, it's only stupid of me to not take this into consideration…." Damon's voice boomed from all corners again making the vampire frown. - Gaming_Account_54691yrCommentedMike instantly moved to the edge of the tree trying to see what was going on in the lake, upon taking a closer look, he saw a beautiful young girl that seemed to be taking a bath naked without a care in the world, but what actually piqued his interest wasn't the naked girl.
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please don't be a
Mike can be found half sleeping under the big tree while of course not forgetting to hide his body when he suddenly heard water splashes coming from the lake nearby. - Gaming_Account_54691yrCommented
bro, this is a life lesson, don't take others opinions or actions into consideration, just do what u think will be better for yourself or a friend
They thought. They wanted to know more about Allen and at the best, make him their friends. But knowing Allen's identity, they didn't know what to do... - Gaming_Account_54691yrCommented
wonder why there isn't a memorisation spell or if there is why is it not the first spell learned
As said previously, Learning magic isn't hard, but comprehending that means learning everything about the magic pattern and using your control to guide the mana in that pattern is hard. - Gaming_Account_54691yrCommented
alot? wonder where the beachs the author referring to are?
The number of champion realm masters in the world is no different from the number of stones that can be found on a beach full of sand! - Gaming_Account_54691yrReplied to PhantomFalcon
may damage the weapons? so not really worth it in the end
While the blood clan and fox spirit army together can take down any normal one thousand-man team but these forces were well trained to take on spiritual beings and even equipped with weapons that can harm the supernatural! - Gaming_Account_54691yrPosted
Ok. I've read all the free chapters and all I can is I WISH FOR MORE. I wasn't expecting much going into this but the immersion I got in every battle hooked me ohh and cant forget how the DEATH magic has been amazing, I was genuinely happy whenever he used it because it wasn't spammed like in other novels and it gave solid reasons for its use or lack of. The twist with the Duke turned into my favourite add to the story and can't wait to see where it goes from here. There are a couple of spelling mistakes here and there but as long as u comment about it the author will notice so it's cool. Didn't take away anything from the story but thought I'd mention it for the convenience for the author in finding the mistakes
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I was reading it as everywhere, but upto the author
The body of the orc swelled up, all in an instant, and exploded into a bloody paste! Its blood splattered everyone but surprisingly none could get on the young Duke. - Gaming_Account_54691yrCommented
correction here: " I also (have) my short coming.... it's natural"
"I also my shortcomings… it's natural" Damon said with a frown. He wasn't sure what the lady was trying to do. - Gaming_Account_54691yrCommented
ok... I love the Duke
"You are delusional if you think a gathering of fanatic fools has what it takes to bring down my family" Duke Hail sneered coldly.