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Issei_Hyoudou_0369

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2022-04-02 JoinedPhilippines
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  • Issei_Hyoudou_0369
    Issei_Hyoudou_03692yr
    Replied to Phase_MorningStar

    Well from what I know, Sennins (Sages) should be humans who practiced long and got in tuned with nature granting them the ability to use senjutsu. An example would be ascetics living on mountains. Though that's my version of it, don't treat it as canon.

    Ch 3 Senjutsu and Ki
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  • Issei_Hyoudou_0369
    Issei_Hyoudou_03692yr
    Replied to Una_Chan

    The others are Song Shuhang from Cultivation Chat Group Theresa Apocalypse from Honkai Impact 3 Kumoko from I'm a spider, so what?!

    [Tsundere Brocon has joined the Dimensional Group Chat!]
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    My Mother Once Said
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  • Issei_Hyoudou_0369
    Issei_Hyoudou_03692yr
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    Overall, the chapter is good. But there were larts where in my opinion, the dialogue were a bit...stiff or out of character. Like where the villagers initially called Citrinitas as Milord but he said to drop it. I think, the villagers should somewhat hesitate first before they agreed since they see the mc as their savior. But the way it was delivered, they were decisive to change their way of calling him like there's no hesitation at all. There's other parts that's a but stiff tol but as I said, the chapter is good. Keep up the good work, Author!🤗

    (A/N: What are your thoughts on the chapter? Love it? Hate it? Please let me know!)
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  • Issei_Hyoudou_0369
    Issei_Hyoudou_03692yr
    Commented

    Mc - Kyrell (Means Dark) Esdeath - Est Shalltear - Tearu?

    (A/N: Y'all got any good adventure names for Esdeath and Shalltear? I got none xD)
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  • Issei_Hyoudou_0369
    Issei_Hyoudou_03692yr
    Commented

    our ancestors did say, "don't stick the d into crazy" but there's a continuation, it's "shove it in"

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  • Issei_Hyoudou_0369
    Issei_Hyoudou_03692yr
    Replied to omega_wolf_ron

    It's Cid Kagenoh from Eminence in Shadow. I recommend it, it's fun to read.

    Being a mob is good.
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  • Issei_Hyoudou_0369
    Issei_Hyoudou_03692yr
    Replied to Ri_On

    It's not me sinve it's not SI fic

    Ch 4 Thoughts
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  • Issei_Hyoudou_0369
    Issei_Hyoudou_03692yr
    Replied to 5thPleiades

    That's when I downloaded FGO

    EMIYA "Try me, you delusional woman."
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