Cosray8d

currently at chapter 64. the system is extremely interesting and the interactions with Orochimaru are very well written. But Hiruzen is completely OOC and dumb. The MC just developed a system that could revolutionize the education in the village and he just sends them to a high risk mission with the only explanation that no other jonin are available. Orochimaru is the sensei of a team of a potential Jinchuriki, one of the last Senju and a potentially very important village asset. Then after MC managed to defeat several jonin and an S-class shinobi he wants to send him against a kage-level enemy. When Danzo is the voice of reason then something truly isn't right. Hiruzen knows approximately how MCs abilities work and therefore definitely wouldn't risk such a great asset to be wasted - especially when the war didn't even start yet. Then there are the inconsistencies with the status of the war and Dan and Nawaki. In the earlier chapters it was stated that they were already dead only for the to be alive later on. The there was MC planing for Tobi when Obito isn't even in the academy yet. This fic has huge potential but the inconsistencies and the character of Hiruzen is too much ooc.

Astolfo best girl confirmed

Definitely the female version of Sasuke!

But Gary does

Wonder what happened to Ash...

Couldn't Robin create hands that can use the fingerpistol? (on weaker enemies and near stronger ones)

The first time the shock is understandable but I hope Mc doesn't act that way in the future.

Mc not talking with the robber is a redeeming trait! The way he dealt with him so far isn't all that bad considering he was ambushed. If he takes this as a learning experience and is more vigilant in the future then perfect.

This fic is basically a sociopathic Gary Stu hunting for waifus and make them as strong as possible while being a fighting maniac. It's very well written and for a harem fic with so many waifus it's girls are also mostly well established and characterized. The only problem I have is the end of Orochimaru and what happened with Guren and this Yuki girl from Oto because they apparently were forgotten.