shanekenoau

Good chaoter, but the pacing is a bit too jarring, should stop skimping on the plot and reduce the writing of the status screen, it would be better

seeing the future be like:

Among the best realistic scifi ive ever read, how the story moves, the filler (fluff-potential) chapters with the female lead, the scientific and technological details, the world itself, wow just amazing...really recommended thank you author for bringing this piece of literature to life.

I relly like the zombie+robot monster..if only there's art to this cjp it would be amazing

wow amazing chp, but maybe should brush up on the wordings a bit, because some sentences sounded a bit off? anyway this is a good chp and i hope all the best for you

Uhm, can the author write more detailed info about fl? her description was very vague apart from her appearance...tell us abt her age, we want to know how legal is she, for research purposes...in addition please describe more about where this conversation between the two happened? only in the last line it was briefly mentioned...

i like this story...more chapter is needed