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Very fulfilling story with a lot of drama action love scenes passion.Cheering on the side for the characters. This was a marathon reading . Worth the extra money spent on it.

The story gives you a chance to dream the what ifs in your mind. I am looking forward to reading more chapters. Main Male Lead is a ordinary person who is experiencing a life of luxury.

A very interesting journey of this Sect. The challenge. Find out how one person can change a world. I find humour in the story. What can I say at this point .I love the story.

I am finding it difficult to not want to skip ahead for a xxx-rated scene when even the characters are having a problem with controlling the urge . The writer sure has the gift for writing .

I have not made any comments yet so I decided to add one here . I am enjoying the development of the story . It's a great story .

Green Tea Man. Mo Fan has dual power yet no one else knows about it yet What a way to get us hooked on to read more of the journey.

A ring around one's neck becomes a pendant . People will take a precious ring like a wedding band and wear it as a pendant . You are certain not to lose the ring right .

At first you may find the story repitive. The author is doing so since the character has to go through the same thing over and over again too. Sometimes you may feel like your life is going in circles. This is a journey of one person's journey to proving his innocence. He has to conquer many things just as many as I have I assume you have too. While I was reading the story I was going to stop reading it and leave it. Now I'm reviewing it in hopes that I can convince you to read it and not to give up at least till chapter 19. So go ahead give it a try I am certain that you are going to enjoy this journey as much as I love it so far . A journey is the adventure the destination is just the stop over to the next journey. Put on your walking gear. Take some notes you may find out that you may need the information

I have to say that the pronoun usage is minor. That's not a reason to shut down the story. The writer is good at his trade .

Now this was a very powerful chapter. The descriptive words gave visual information to my mind to see what was happening. Although I am wondering if it's the System transforming my mind too? 😁

There is a lot of description. I am having troubles holding on to the story There seems to be a lot of information but no information . I am not sure how much longer I can hold on to the story.

Pig Trotter* pig's feet. Mandarin : 猪蹄

Pig Trotter* pig's feet. Mandarin : 猪蹄.