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suddenly changed to a Chinese name

first you made the MC's name Chinese i don't mind but you did worse because you added a storyline like other Chinese novels

In my opinion, this novel's story is rotten because it doesn't explain why Hiruzen can use Edo Tensei

I want to ask, is this translation consistent with no hiatuses in the middle of the story?

Why is Kurenai Yuhi Makoto's father's name not Yuhi Shinku?

Sorry, from chapter 10 onwards, the storyline is a bit similar to the novel Young Master in China, which makes me dislike why you create conflict with that method when there are many other ways.

the beginning of the story is almost like a fanfic where the MC is Hachiman

Congratulations, you got an MC who was brainwashed to be a nationalist. I'm confused about this MC. He lived in Japan and America for 20 years, but in his heart he is only a Chinese citizen.

sorry i gave 2 stars for character development because you used a chinese name instead of the real mama in the original comic

Thank you for your input, I will improve the story in the future because this is my first time writing a story.