SHADILLAC09

I'm not crying!!! You're crying!!

I just picked up this novel and I adore the concept! I especially like to see how the characters and the world reacts to all of these impossible items thrown into the mix

This is hands down my favorite Marvel FF I have read on here all year( I have tried at least 44 of them ). Lots of great Marvel elements while seamlessly adding skills and abilities from other verses. The only con is that the updates are few and far between which always makes me think the author dropped the novel.

Ugh This story started out to so promising but ended up being a huge waste of time. The title is a misnomer because the MC doesnt get any random skills from a system, the system just makes are into some kind of OP knight. That would have made for a beautiful story but the author forgets the older chapters as he writes. Like the MC reincarnated in the MCU with full knowledge of the timeline just to forget EVERYTHING out of no where once the chitauri show up. Or like the fact the MC reveals her full face and name to the avengers only for EVERYONE (except tony stark) to forget her the moment the very next chapter. It all happens abruptly without and reason. And how does the MC go from knowing every major threat coming to the marvel universe from both movies and comics to not even recognizing the Ancient one. It breaks my heart because it started so damn well then around chpt 30 the MC becomes a robot and everything just goes down hill.

I dont usually like to review until I read at least 50 chapts but I like this story and I want to see it go somewhere. Pros: Great story telling. Great story direction, Great MC intro into the story. Cons: Seriously needs a proofreader. The author uses "afterward" just as much if not more than conventional punctuation. I use a text to speech reader for my lightnovels and it was almost annoying to hear the voice say that word at the end of EVERY sentence for like 9 chapters. With only 13 chapts out, it is far to soon to say it is a good story, but it has a phenomenal start.

Just when I find out there was a re-write, I reread the whole story just to find out there is another hiatus.

1. I would love some more slice of life so I can really understand the character and his motivations better. 2. I love the marvel roster of baddies but I feel like they are all taken with their own relationships and baggage. For romance I prefer to see more obscure characters or maybe an OC love interest just so the world feels more alive and we aren't only interacting with marvel main cast characters.

For instance why not stumble into one of those ruins and find a divinely stunning fae lady to wife up after you show her the glories of modern day coffee. And her personality can be however the story needs her to be

Why not create a unique love interest for the mc? I think it's better to create someone new to travel the multiverse with instead of picking someone already deeply involved in one universe

From the given list I like Jessica Jones for the love interest but I would not mind seeing a character that was not in the mcu, like Elektra. This gives the chance for some unique story lines to separate this story from just following the mcu plot lines. We can even do one of the eternals like ajak. If we want to keep it with mcu characters. Just want to see something new and interesting. Thank you.