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I am on chpt 5***

This story reads like a 4 year old child is telling it. Grammer is all over the place, the MC practically becomes a God creating OP jutsu like Rasenshuriken at 3 years old. All in all this is kind of awful right now. I will give it 20 chapters to see if it improves. I am on ch. 10 when writing this.

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Is this dropped?

Why stop at only Konoha bloodlines? What about Kaguya, Yuki, Hoshigaki, the people who can turn into water, And the boys who can manipulate sand. So many bloodlines to pick from outside of Konoha. And Namikaze isnt even really a bloodline.

I spent far too much time laughing at this comment. The first reason is because its true. The second reason is because I kept imagining the comment writer's face of are you stupid or something. But, sadly Minato's abilities were not passed on to his son so all of his abilities die with him. Since his skills were not pass on then that means they were not in his blood but a product of his own hard work.

I vote Uzumaki because I would like to see the MC do some pretty amazing things with seals in the marvel world. Also, other Uzumaki abilities such as the minds eye and the adamantine sealing chains can come in clutch for recon and grabbing things that are supposed to be out of reach respectively. It would be funny to see him moving through the city like spiderman with the chains as well. I have not done any research on it but the chains should have some other special ability as well. I think it can write seals in mid air or something. But you can probably create your own abilities and attribute it to Marvel universe madness. Also, its the weirdest ability in the pool but you can have people heal by biting you. Maybe this can be a way to save uncle ben or something idk.

Are the two universes colliding?

This story has a great concept but there are a few things that make it hard to sit and enjoy this story. I have read all the chapters that are currently out(ch. 23) so here are my thoughts so far. 1 - The story is written like the author's first language is not English. There are so many references that are made that just dont make sense in English at all. It was normal in the beginning but as the story goes on the author includes more and more of these references which takes some mental gymnastics to understand. 2 - The MC is boring and annoying. There are literal WHOLE chapters of the MC just rambling on and on in his head. He does this while overexplaining the simplest of things and it is soooooo boring to read. The MC had character and personality when he was in the power selection space, but when he reincarnates he becomes a robot. He doesnt talk to anyone and just spends his days over explaining his decisions in his head. I understand if he is antisocial but that is not really addressed. He just acts like a terminator robot the. 3 - This is one just my own personal annoyance. But I hate it when in fan-fics the MC always states they dont want to change canon. It is so dumb. You are a new character that was thrown into this world. You have already changed canon so why dont you just do what you want?? All in all, I think the author should get some help with the English translations and add just a little more personality to the MC. Hopefully, without the endless inner dialogues about random topics.

I gotta say I love this fan-fic so far! I am always hype for an OP insert. I just want to know how much of an impact will she have on canon? Will she flow with canon events in an attempt to "not change the timeline."? Will her presence drastically change the canon events? Or will her presence invalidate canon and cause new events to happen? Like new missions, new characters joining in, new villains, and new places to visit. For instance Raven was not in Young Justice I would personally love to see her join the team. That is just an example. I am excited to see the future of this fanfic.

Do you mean Xavier instead of quicksilver?

Releases take so long I have to re-read the last few chapters just to understand what this chapter is even about. Story has an ok concept and Good execution, but the consistency of the chapter releases just make me lose interest. I will try again in a year if this doesnt get dropped by then.

I love everything about this! Seeing the police get a leg up is awesome, hopefully they will no longer be cannon fodder when they are up against supers. But I feel like this will give the police more reasons to be against spiderman and other vigilantes, since now they can be more effective at their job. I look forward to how the author handles that scenario.

I like where this story is going so far cant wait to see more! Also, I love the interactions between the lesser known characters. Most fan-fics forget Elektra even exists. Hope to see more of that.

I should run for president. My first order of business would be to make cliff hangers illegal. The punishment would be to release 10 chapters of yours story immediately! haha Thank for the update

Everyone always gets so wrapped up with the Military and DOD when weapons and tech needs to be given out. I think it would be nice to see the MC put in a concerted effort to arm average policeman. Especially once it starts raining aliens. The police are expected to do their job but with NO tools that even remotely help with that job. Also, this is a good way to protect Gwen's dad who dies 99.999% of the time in EVERY single timeline.

While I am aware of all of Charle's flaws, the alternative is not much better. Once the government decide to fully dedicate to the eradication of mutants they develop a crazy number to detect an active x-gene. Its either bring them into the fold and teach them to defend themselves or leave them high and dry to be abducted and experimented on. I wish the comics gave a better alternative to the mind raper and the mutant hiter, but all the other groups always get swallowed into one of those 2 camps.

My friend you are limiting your thought scope to only the MC. The invention could be useful to others who he does not want to give NZT to. And I am sure he can get a lexicon of other languages if and when he intervenes in the Guardians of the Galaxy plot. Like wouldnt it be cool if EVERYONE understood groot.

Some future technology recommendations: The Universal Translator(Star Trek) - No more language barriers, The Replicator(Star Trek) - All the world's waste can be recycled into something useful, The Sonic Screwdriver(Doctor who) - Omni Tool that does pretty much everything, Instant Subliminal Learning(The Matrix) - To learn things that are not Tech related like fighting techniques.