SHADILLAC09

I am totally stealing this

I just binged to this chapter. And this story is supa hot fire! But shouldnt the MC be getting points when he is in fights as well. I mean come on from the crazy amount of fear coming off of flash he had to have earned a few hundred points. And Kraven is a major spider man villain, the MC caused made him commit suicide out of inferiority yet he didnt get any points for that? I thought it was because he only gets points from his work but he got points from black widow showing interest so that isnt the case.

There is another one called celestial blacksmith. It has almost the same chapter 1 so I don't know which is the copy

I should have heeded your warning haha! After a while it just sounds like senseless rambling and becomes so hard to get through.

This is my favorite yugioh fan fic yet. We have not even touched much on the Marvel side of things as of the lastest chpt(22), but the way the yugioh system is set up makes me look forward to how the abilities will work in the future. Keep going Author you have the foundations for an amazing story here.

This is a great concept but the story feels like it was put together with AI and rushed. Like how does black widow act like she never saw him before when they fought the chitauri together. It's so frustrating. And how did he meet someone in one chapter and they are falling in love the next.

Someone comment here when the MC wakes up from this mental health crisis and the story finally starts. Because reading a story about a guy whose whole identity is being raised on the streets of Harlem but has no street smarts or even basic survival instinct is going to drive me to my own mad house.

The ending of this chapter made me full on belly laugh hahaha love it!

I'm not crying!!! You're crying!!

I just picked up this novel and I adore the concept! I especially like to see how the characters and the world reacts to all of these impossible items thrown into the mix