MC taking so many Ls, very unusual for a fanfic

ok this is seriously annoying, overlord fanfics are annoying, i love the show but the fanfic writers are too obsessed with the game rather than getting straight into the new world I just do not care about the game, the reason I watch and enjoy overlord is because of the misunderstandings, Ainz and his shenanigans with his subordinates There are seriously way too many fanfics about this show that want to write about the game for some reason, I usually just skip them and wait until the damn fanfic gets to the new world

lamest nickname that I've ever read from a danmachi fanfic

the author read too many chinese novel or something? I swear I read this line from a manhua before, the way she talked sounded like a cultivator or something

Ais is kinda overrated tbh, Riveria is even more beautiful and is an actual princess

honestly, the MC seems like a pushover throughout this fic, I agree with the previous commenter's statements, he should not constantly be giving out free services if he wants to earn money, it's just annoying

I'm getting sick and tired of the dumb cliche of MCs hiding their strength... I swear, the last 3 novels I read had this trope as well

the author is chinese, with my experience in reading 999+ chinese novels, I am not surprised

MC be like

if this wasn't a danmachi fanfic, I would've thought that this was a chinese cultivation novel

bro, look at the tags, what were u expecting? from both franchises, danmachi and fate to boot

Negative person? lol, you are the one that started this a**hole, acting all smug and sh*t, do you think you are not a negative person yourself? calling someone a hypocrite when you are a hypocrite as well, I was just minding my own business, so don't try to act all innocent. If you didn't want any beef, maybe next time, try not to pick fights with strangers online and mind your own goddamn business

I mean, for people like them that can destroy buildings with ease, I imagine that a kilogram is not that different from a feather for me, even if I hold a feather all the time, I would most likely get tired from lifting my arm, not from lifting the feather itself

Alexia's color is pink and rose is gold iirc

I love how you are trying to dissect a simple question that can be answered by a "yes" or a "no" into something profound and deep to make yourself look smart. But you simply do not understand something, not with your low IQ, but you see, I am not obligated to write a proper review for a random story that I found in my recommendations, you call me a hypocrite, but writing a review is something that a reader wants to do of their own volition, not something forced upon by an imbecile like you. You call me a hypocrite because I don't go into details of how I think of the story? Dude, just read it yourself and write a review on your own if you are going to be pissy about it

what? a kilo is not that much, I can even lift 50+ kilograms, did the author mean a kiloton?

and don't reply "but this a review comment section, you are supposed to give a clear and concise review of the story" I was just answering that guy's question, I had to clarify in case another idiot like you misunderstood and I can't be bothered to write a proper review, I gave it three stars because I thought it was mid

buddy, are you braindead? his question was "Is it good?" and you are expecting me to write an essay just to answer such a simple question? The author's synopsis and my answer is fundamentally different, so don't try to act all smug buddy, you just made yourself look like an idiot

its mid

What the heck is with the synopsis?! It is so barebones! I have no idea what the story is all about, except that the MC is a spearman, my guy, you got to have a better synopsis, to capture a reader and entice them to read your work. I rate this as a three simply because I haven't read this yet, I'll change my rating later.