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lntrusiveThoughts7dCommentedCh 25 25. Intrusion of the Crystal Labyrinth- lntrusiveThoughts7dCommented
Lord of Chang
But not all were turned into senseless babbling creatures incapable of the most basic of reasoning; the most powerful and influential Lord of Changs barely stood their ground by using their staffs, pillars, fence, and other such objects. Any attempt at magic failed miserably, either fizzling uselessly or backfiring horribly. - lntrusiveThoughts8dCommentedCh 164 Chapter 155: Destruction
- lntrusiveThoughts8dCommentedIf all Necron infantry were of this caliber in melee... perhaps Hades faced less pressure than anticipated.
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Hades when he hears about this
"Glowing green bugs?" - lntrusiveThoughts14dCommentedWhat's up, everyone? I'm back. I decided to continue here. If there are things you would like to see, please comment.
- lntrusiveThoughts14dCommentedCh 24 24. Happy Little Accident
- lntrusiveThoughts15dCommentedCh 184 Arriving On Dantooine
- lntrusiveThoughts18dCommentedChapter 141: Trial from Hades 133 Part 1
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Not much of a surprise if you tell us about it lol
AN - Next chap Flying Lesson! Without Draco around how would the class change? Plus a surprise POV change along with the next target reveal in the next chapter. - lntrusiveThoughts21dCommented23. Reflection on Consequences
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This is going to come back to bite them huh
"Ah, Ms. Carter," Kathleen Taylor began, "I apologize for arriving unannounced." Ms. Carter assured her it was no problem. The CEO continued, "This is my nephew Tyson Smith, and his fiance, Illyana." - lntrusiveThoughts29dCommented
I liked it idk why all the hate
Ans: Nope, call my naming sense worse, but I honestly thought it's a good name. :( - lntrusiveThoughts1mthCommentedCh 40 39. A new name
- lntrusiveThoughts1mthCommentedCh 25 C25 Knee-Nova War! & Escape!
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Liking the pace and depth of process. Though, the dialogue can be a bit long winded at times.
The story should pick up the pace from here on forth. But I honestly don't think that's it's slow paced, and the reason anyone feels that way is because each chapter is only a 1000 words and not a lot of development can happen with that little of a word count - lntrusiveThoughts1mthCommented
Bro this chick is crazy
"And the boldness and energy your eyes give off, as if they wouldn't ripple even if the whole world started falling apart." She gasped. - lntrusiveThoughts1mthReplied to DaoBeginning
Mc: “can MY dad fight?”
With a figure like that, there's no way in hell I'm ever going to actually consider her as my mother. Hell, I'd probably even fight my dad in this world to make her mine.