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I doubt a dagger as a main weapon is the best to end a fight in one move, except if it's a surprise attack from behind, otherwise it's the worst choice.
I won't call that OP in a world where magic exists.
I can't remember which rank it is, it would have been good to have an intro chapters, or simply to have number instead, from I to V.
if each squads here can have them there probably enough to give one or two to reconnaissance team.
inspiration is not a problem but the scenes are the same. It s only shorter because you deleted parts but didnt add something of your own. Also some changes feel weird to me, for example the regressor is too kind, giving such a rare and expensive potion to a nobody she just met, in the original the mc won the trust of the regressor by his own effort and was not dumb to forget to use his eye skill. You made the first comrade ambitious according to his statut, but he doesnt act like that he is more like the original, also his stats/potential are more those of a tank than an assassin. You can say it s my taste but i m not optimistic about the changes of the mc and the regressor.
sometimes he is called commander and other time sergent
I know but it would be better to save money to buy the trait that can give you mana affinity.
But he cant have all, that s why he needs to give the priority to those he can upgrade.
It s the same power system as shadow slave?
especially uncooked.
or he still a noob in making skills.
Heavy metal bow? A translation mistake? A bow shoots because it bends, a metal bow cannot shoot (unless it has pulleys but why would you use that instead of a normal bow?). And a distance of 150 meters is achievable by real life bows, with a traditional longbow even 300 m is possible.
doesnt fit the condition of having an ordinary appearance.
Or maybe he will obtain 10 different attributes.
And they never thought about selling entertainment?
it would be a waste except if this hero is already sss tier.