Dynaxty

the beginning was pretty boring but im glad I held on, your most recent chapters are way better. keep this up you will have a loyal fan.

and I dont understand why he was so quick to show his hand and rebel. like could he not wait a few days to get stronger. or is he not worry about his family that is just a commoner family.

there are many other things wrong with the story and all I got to say trust the bad reviews about the story, it will give you an idea what to expect from the story

I hope this is not a recurring issue

I third that comment, I agree

why exactly did she come than. it makes absolutely no sense for her to risk coming when Oliver alone could of brought him back just as easily. hopefully you explained why she had to come get him herself.

am I the only one that is confused why he so resistance to doing anything with her? or did the author explain why and I just didn't read that part.

the author delete all bad reviews. this novel is not good, don't waste your time on it. hopefully this comment don't get deleted too

the only issue I have with this novel is that the mc is in the body of a shy quiet 7 year old and he act nothing like that plus he talk to his invisible friend out in the open. I wouldn't normally have a problem with it but somethings he say out loud shouldn't be said. if any normal thinking person heard what he be saying and how he acting completely different than his normal self would have doubts. I wouldn't say they would guess he transgression in the boy body but they should at least suspect the boy thinks he a different person from the things he saying. he supposed to have lost he memories not have split personalities or something. he talks like he a different person not like he lost memories.

I don't understand why he thinks the status should be the first to unlock if he want to get stronger instead of the other choice which literally have a clear path to strengthen himself.