Slither21

Thanks for the chapter, glad you didn’t shoehorn maki and emi into the hunt aswell like a bunch of other authors would’ve. It’s such a crappy trope where characters just don’t listen/trust their comrades with things or feel a need to be nosy/“helpful” (but in a selfish way”

It’d be much easier to ignore/get over her having the gates if her character was likable. But she’s still acting like she’s got a chip on her shoulder and something to prove EVEN with the gates.

Goddamn the entitlement is strong with this one

Oh that’s hot ass Thanks for the heads up

Yeah not a fan at all if Onyx here. Literally doing illegal blood tests and gathering. Meanwhile ozpin is letting this happen even if hes the former chief of protection or whatever he’s still the current headmaster of one of the four most important institutions on the planet. Idk it felt like there was a lot of brute forcing actions and ignoring logic to get what you wanted, which im assuming is to expose the magic in Alex’s blood.

Me when children get kidnapped and have to save themselves because we’re incompetent as law enforcement and so we punish and threaten to imprison the kidnapped and traumatised children who are being trained to save us all from the unending wave of monsters

This seems ridiculous especially because of these circumstances. Huntsman in training (someone training to protect your asses from evil shadow monsters) Stupidly overpowered (why risk provoking him when he’s shown that he’s willing to kill) Protected other huntsman in training from terrorists (that the law enforcement couldn’t stop so they had to go after them themselves) And other reasons that will take up too much space. Excalibur, let’s nuke this city, it’s beyond saving >:D

Well good luck to him with getting that done lol

Help me end you

With all the talk about the system boosting the hell out of viserion, I’d be super disappointed if all she can do is survive a battle against two younger non system boosted dragons