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Kiera best girl
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There 10 yrs old who knows maybe they woul just spill the beans
He didnât say donât use it he said donât tell anyone itâs a life weapon
Not tryna hate but you said your a new author and wanted tips. Mystery is a great part of any story this whole arc would have been so much better if you had not told us about this conversation and left us wondering why she was so persistent instead we now go through a whole arc waiting for the mc to figure out something we already know.
It would have been better for you to leave this all a mystery until Atticus got closer to it. That is assuming this isnât common knowledge in this world if everyone weak and all knew this stuff then itâs fine