I hope she doesn't kill him, since Draco will be angry with her xD

Are you adding more chapters to forward-readimg again? ;_; Got updates, but no chapters :[

Good point. The mind link seems to work great for the rogues ^^

It's funny how all the men gets sparks for Rosina, but she gets none for them xD

I was just thinking about something. Maybe it's just me not knowing a whole lot about werewolves, but it seems to change from story to story anyhow. But how far is the range for mind linking? Cause if you can mind link your partner or pack, a kidnapped person would do that, yeah? Also, since you said there's a neck mark, that also allows for mind link between mates, and considering Draco and Rosina just got married, wouldn't the people around them assume that she would have the mark and therefore be asking Draco "have you tried your mind link?"? Another thing; I believe you first wrote that it took over a week travelling from the capital to the 13th pack, but just in a recent chapter you said that it had only taken some days. Did you change it or is it a mistake?

had* been stepped on

On* her bed

It should be "I was so worried"

Hands* in plural

grasping*

[...] but what Rosina did made her [...]

slow motions*

focused on the pleasure

lowering toward her [...]

massaged it*

[...] and was about to put her clothes back on [...]

breasts *

on Violetta

"placing it on her own breast" since you're only talking about one hand, yes?

in her p*ssy