I just finished reading the first season, it's a very good novel. I did not find any grammar flaws. Almost all areas of this work are excellent. Will definitely recommend this book. It has a unique plot, which as a writer I love. The author did a very good job. The only thing I found a little uncomfortable during reading was that, the author does a lot of telling instead of showing. Other than that this novel is really good.

It was well written. There were a few sentences that stood out to me as awkward but other than that this is a well-written chapter. Keep up the good work, author.

EGGSCUSE ME

Its a really well written book and has a lot of potential! The emotions, characters are all well written! Except the few typos and grammar errors, this book was a wonderful read for me

typo

isnt the fact already known?

Wow this book totally caught me off guard. I really like the writing and the way the author describes the things. The plotline is interesting too. Looking forward to the upcoming chapters!

This novel is really well written! Good job author~ I added it to my collection! It has an interesting premise and is an easy read. I wish I could read all the chapters, but sadly I have to wait. I will be cheering you on!

he...called her hun

use single quotes since double is for dialogue

I want this sksksksks

crouched? crochet = knit

Wha- she's a ghost?

wanted*

That's quite rare, considering they're mafia

Wooo Master

An hour later, someone entered the study. I did not need to lift my head to know who they were.

entered* typo I think

Um sir, can you throw those cufflinks in the direction of this trash can. I can sell- I mean recycle them

Hello. It's time for Shameless Author Review. Idk how to write this without sounding very uhh narcissistic but here we go. One, I for one love the gore scenes I write in the novel. It's so much exciting to write this. (That's why you may find other areas lacking, I apologise.) It's a bit of a fast paced novel. I'm working on it. And I love how Mercy comes to accept her desires instead of sticking to what she was taught to do and restricting herself. I have 0 opinion on the ML. Yep, he's the abandoned child here. Ahem, so that's it I guess. Hope you enjoy my novel! With Love, Nyx