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Usha_Schuit10mthCommentedCh 113 Chapter 113- Usha_Schuit10mthCommented
Yesss 2nd huband I second that fully haha
He cared for Dav the same way I cared for Dav, he somewhat cared for me, the same where Dav cared for me. He acts like my husband whenever Dav isn't available– maybe, it is only right if I consider him as a second husband. - Usha_Schuit10mthCommentedCh 107 Chapter 107
- Usha_Schuit10mthCommentedCh 34 You’re Hurting Me!!
- Usha_Schuit10mthCommented
sorry brother
This paragraph has been deleted. - Usha_Schuit11mthCommented
why did fate have to be so cruel
But he was matched with many models and actresses whose beauty were ethereal, yet he stayed steadfast in his choice to wait for Kate. - Usha_Schuit11mthCommented
😭😭😭
Henry's eyes were on Kate the whole time. Back then, he wondered what this woman did to his late brother to make him reject all kinds of women just because he said he was already in love with his coworker. - Usha_Schuit11mthCommented
I'm not crying your crying she was the love of his brothers life. this is so tragic don't you dare get bored or break her heart. I won't stand for it. I'm actually crying this is so heartbreaking 💔😭
As Henry was deep in thought, he noticed one of the stars was shining brighter compared to the others, 'Brother, are you watching me from above? If you are, then I'm sorry that I'm going to hurt the love of your life. I have a feeling that things won't end well between us, but I can't stop myself from wanting her.' - Usha_Schuit11mthCommentedCh 70 Distrust
- Usha_Schuit1yrCommentedCh 49 Kissed Him?
- Usha_Schuit1yrCommentedCh 39 The question
- Usha_Schuit1yrCommentedCh 36 Leaving
- Usha_Schuit1yrCommented
[.. on the door]
"Wake up, miss! The governess is already here!" hazel frowned in her sleep as she turned and slept again but the bnaging on door only increased., - Usha_Schuit1yrCommented
**[..at the door] this will be my last comment around this topic. But I do strongly suggest, to ask for an editor to help you out. This will make it easier to read, and more fun for readers as well. As a result this will make your book more appealing and get more attention/ traction.. I hope you'll consider this. Best of luck, and once again I love the story line. Cheers 🌹
Her lips pursued into a thin line but she did not try to open her eyes at all. She was feeling so exhausted that she had no desire to open her eyes and check who was on the door. She had decided to sleep until the end of the world! - Usha_Schuit1yrCommented
[... looked at her with A concerned gaze, and at the brink of tears, threatening to spill over any minute now. And so they did, like a broken dam.] (Somehow I keep thinking, "like a broken record" sounds way nicer. But doesn't makes much sense lol 😂)
"It is okay to cry sometimes, if you feel like it!" she assured Hazel as she looked at her with concerned gaze and the tears that were on the brim and threatening her to fall any moment came out like a broken dam! - Usha_Schuit1yrReplied to Flabbergasted
thanks I noticed later on in the story somehow I got confused in that part. kind of you to reply much appreciated ☺️
"That is because this is really her first time entering a zoo. She never had the luxury to visit the zoo," Audrey replied to Rachel's question. Her reply left Rachel even more confused. - Usha_Schuit1yrCommented
it probably should have been: [...even when I was the princess...this was the first time that she was calling me, "my lady".
"Are you okay, my lady?" she looked back at the girl who had always called me by name even when she was the princess and this was the first time when she was calling her, my lady. - Usha_Schuit1yrReplied to Usha_Schuit
[while her after had been gone for a long time, or, had already been gone for a long time] <3 it would read much more easier in that manor. that's my personal humble opinion though pls don't take offense. I really love the story line though.
How much time had passed when she finally came back to my senses. She was standing alone in the room while her father had gone for a long time. The room was cold and deserted like her life, yet she had always realised that at least she had a place to live and good food to eat with Anne on her side.