VidDav_FerDeL

Pls more action and less slice of life that has no relevance to the plot

Pacing is too slow and dialouge is bland

AU that starts before voldy is enrolled into hogwarts and have hogwarts legacy lore so lots of original content.Keep cooking this is good

Most likely the book harry potter does not exist in their previous life

no harem pls

Personally ingenium should have survived because he proved that being a hero wasn't just a job for him and took it seriously by not hesitating to maim himself to save her but you could take this situation as a lesson to jigsaw that his traps are not perfect and should improve moving forward

Author i have no idea what you're on but keep on cooking because this is one of the few well done mha fics that is not tied to the main characters except for a couple and no hint of wish fulfilment like harems.The story is still early on but its looking promising

Their future child

People are frustrated and disapointed with the recent drop in quality in the last few chapters so naturally they would complain so hopefully the author would wake up because if people are complaining here then i would pity the people in his patreon having to deal with this

if he learned firebending why not use lightning as well since its both fast and accurate and an added bonus is that it goes well with the blue asthetic going on