Daoist40k

I dont understand Chinese glazing of Sasuke

I agree with you. My meaning is not every girl needs to be bisexual. That was the downside, since the second girl directly enters the story already in this kind of relationship, and we can assume it will continue this way. I would understand it more if it were an already established bisexual couple, or if it were between close friends who were already like that. I would skip those parts and read it that way but I guess I am so straight.

从木叶村开始的海陆空最强生物

从木叶村开始的海陆空最强生物

First warning: there is YURİ in the harem. The author makes the harem bigger through yuri, at least with the first one. Not my cup of tea. The writing is good, and the story’s entry and premise are fine, but the MC kind of lacks genuine emotion. You mostly understand his character only through his actions, and even then it feels lacking. As for updates, I’ve read 10 chapters and skimmed up to chapter 38. It’s not bad as a start, but it’s still too early to tell. In terms of development, I’m not sure—some things feel off. The author does try to stay truthful to the characters, but the extras feel off, and there are holes in the logic and world background. I feel like (with my biases) the MC is too much of a puppet to the story. Relying on actions rather than monologue is good, but there’s too much rigidity in serving the plot and in the characters. The lack of planning in the MC and the story results in a feeling of not fully connecting to it.

Thank you very much for the warning and I agree Yuri ın Harem is NTR.

Why we are seeing Fels's mind of all characters? It feels like protagoniat is all other characters rather than our MC. I read all other characters acting but MC. Even when he shows up he just watches WTF

Main point is before Evilus pulled back it felt like final war or big clash at the least because of the tempo. But now he prolonged it. He should have cut side characters time and realigned the tempo

I don’t think this is a good enough point. Original MC, despite being older, had far less experience. Zeus only told him stories and then sent him to Orario. These characters are only twelve years old and have already lived through the Black Dragon attack and other events afterward. Despite being reincarnated and till now, MC still struggles to get the necessary motivation and focus. Since arriving in Orario, story has focused heavily on slice-of-life content(full of jokes and unnecessary drama) with repeated backstories but little development for MC. Story then falls into one-on-one fights, and level-ups and cycle all this. Even after trauma and world-building being explored are things that were already in original story. All of these elements already exist in the original, the problem lies in their execution. It is overused, not balanced, and repeated. We don’t need to see every side character’s perspective in detail. If our mc isnt buffed he would be a Third Spectator.

I completely agree with you. It is meaningless drama. He should put 16 age rule to family first.(Concordo plenamente com você. É um drama sem sentido. Ele deveria priorizar a família em relação à regra dos 16 anos.)