Zertheft

At first, this novel's narrative was fire. The mc's debate to Righteous_One is absolutely emotional and intense, which the part i liked the most. That argument where he just... roasted that false god, is goddamn crazy. However, the more i read to higher chapters, the more it lost its tensity. At first, it was like intriguing, even it is obviously ai-reliant writing. But... it started to gradually lost during school academy arc, which shows that it starts to get boring because the ai-narrative absolutely... mid. Emotionless, literally no emotions at all. Just the same narrative of an ai, not the person who wrote it. Hence, its only goof at first but become bad after reaching high chapters. Thats my comment about it. Its sad that i have high expectations during that after argument, and now? I have to apologize, i'm dropping it. I saw no potential anymore as i read many, many novels. Even a chinese narrative does better... no offense. At least they use their cultural narrative not an A.I overdependency narration and edit it some to make it good. Thats about it.

Lol, literally other webnovels has worse ai even. At least this one is pretty decent. But others? Utterly emotionless, they just like short each sentence then just lack TENSE, literally. One of those examples are "The Extra is a Genius?!" And i say its 100x much worse than this. Not even a comparison, pal. Even its ai, if their writing or narrative lack WHATEVER MAKES IT EXCITED, then its automatic 1 star

Honest opinion. Please don't take it as offense, but... after reading many novels, i can clearly see this is ai-utilized and author-edited some to fit. No, i'm not saying ai is bad, its just. The narrative feels empty. It lacks emotions or tensity, it lacks what makes it excited... like, i feel like im perceiving a hollow shell, man. So, thats my opinion about it. Up to you to erase this... if you did, then you are on my blacklist or disrespectful authors. Thats all about it.

That was peak

Kyo x Nia dynamics for the win

Bro didn't hold back💀

Bro wyaf those talents🗿🗿🗿🗿

No way bro is that the sad oneshot where a story of a guy living in zombie apocalypse world and met the zombified-conscious girl? Where at first he was wary of her then suddenly liked her until some f#### came out of nowhere and ruins the day, which probably the most infuriating and saddest backbone i have ever felt back then. And you just forced me to recall it......which makes me smile that you made it a good ending. Your a true hero.

Could have manipulated him as a paqn though...

It was all games till Amon donned a crystal monocle in his right eye💀