Jerod_Storm

Really loving the story so far. Definitely a great job done so far and I cant wait to see more of this!

I liked the way you made the protagonist not have to die right away by truck or stabbing as soon as the reincarnation is decided. Definitely better so they dont have any regrets of not living a life fully before becoming someone else.

Thats one hell of a bombshell. It makes sense though so I cant wait to see what happens.

Exactly. Early game. He has the time to max his stats. Unless ive been blind he has already raised his stats to double s level and the event where bell frees liliruca hasnt even happened yet. Hasnt he only been in the world for maybe a week if that. Hes already not going to be breaking any records for level 2 either so theres no point in rushing unnecessarily when he already has the strength to go to the deeper floors without leveling up. And as a near max level one fighting level two monsters his stat scavenging shouldnt be 1~2% of his stat gains. They should be the full amount being given simply because hes still level one and level two monsters excelia is just a straight quality improvement over level ones. He shouldnt even need to go as far as the rex before the safe zone if even half that far to max his stats. Then once his stats do hit max he could use the liliruca arc to also get out of the familia of soma at least if not also join hestia familia which could also help him keep track of where in the story arc timeline he is. Also hestia could be trusted to keep his skills secret like she kept bells skill secret as well. Additionally he could use the time between the soma arc and monster rex arcs to get his level two stats to max as well using the safe zone rex as his grand feat for level three. I feel ive overdone my point and have ranted in which case im sorry. Once the ideas start coming they are hard to stop. Anyway i love the story and hope to see more in the future!!!

Don't forget he is also one with the speed force and doesn't have to worry about his calorie intake and is smarter as well since he doesn't fight others at normal speed and even more level headed as he reacted quickly enough to save danton black using the calm he gained from running for an eternity in the speed force. And not liking Iris has allowed him to avoid certain pitfalls in his daily life as well.

Even more truthfully. Lightning has been around since the earth first formed and was nothing but chaotic storms until the energy from the planets birth settled. There are even cosmic storms that happen as well so Lightning may be fleeting when you see it but it will always exist. Well until the death of the universe anyways lol

Ok so there wasn't a missing chapter. It still feels weird and whiplashy

This is the second time I've felt like there was a chapter that got skipped between the last chapter and this one. No context at all! SMH.

Big Bad BeetleBorgs

Looking forward to it! I really loved the Abomination fight especially how Peter handled everything that came immediately after. Now I don't really remember what the current date in the story is but with the holidays coming around are there any holiday chapters or arcs planned? Any Spider-Man saves Santa or Christmas as a whole episode? To clarify, my mind goes back to the Mighty Morphin Power Rangers episode/movie (I had it on VHS tape as a kid) titled If I remember correctly "I'm Dreaming of a White Ranger" . A special where the rangers saved Santa and the North Pole from Rito and Goldar though I don't remember what the nefarious plot specifically was. I'm not even sure if that was considered canon or not. Though just like Ivan Ooze it is canon in my mind. They just don't make villains like Ivan Ooze anymore. . (sigh) but they don't make Hero Shows like Mighty Morphin either. (cough) Or BeetleBorgs . .Man I miss my childhood.