Axpn

Hopefully, I was expecting the match up. Two monsters being together sounds something

I didn't read the other one but I like your idea of using Disney plots. I like it. Especially him being a dad. Great one man.

I like it. Hopefully you'll write more of this. This one actually good. I like how unpredictable the story goes, the watch specifically. Gives more versatility. A huge fan of the work btw so I really like it.

Sometimes they don't tho

It's good But way too fast for me.... Hopefully this will be longer than expected.

Finally, someone actually give a Zoan Devil fruit.

Pls refrain from using Famous names, Way too confusing for the story. The first time I read Toji and him fighting with Red riot Template makes me feel like the world just crossed into jjk already. I like your story but your naming makes me really confused.

Good Ideas but Unfortunately I stopped writing due to depression and stress I've been experiencing. I'll continue writing and I will also write a different story once I bought a new PC. I already have the chapters but I'm still editing it.

The story is good but the way it shows around the invincibility of the chakra based powers on the original concept which I'm not sure whether he is the only one who can use them or not makes me not treat this a decent story. It's getting ridiculous by chapter. Disregarding the power ranking coz he's already powerful with his own like a lunarian or something, chakra usage where it's concept is practically zero in one piece if I'm not wrong. Naruto Based powers are too overpowered here.

This makes the elders and other individuals a joke