Harru

Thank you for your hard work, dear translator. Although I must say, in my personal opinion, the original name of the main character — Kanbe Hikaru, sounds better than the one you chose.

You're really getting on my nerves with all your whining

To be honest, it’s pretty disappointing that the author decided to simply repeat Adam’s fate from the original story. When you read fanfiction, you expect the author not to rehash familiar plots, but apparently, it’s inevitable. It’s pretty sad, and pointless.

Thanks for the chapter, author. I have a question. How long will it take for the main character’s relationships with the girls to develop? The book’s page lists the tags “harem” and “romance,” and we’re already 40 chapters in, but Akira hasn’t made any moves yet. It’s more than clear that you want to develop the romantic relationships gradually, but personally, I hope this doesn’t turn into a never-ending comedy where progress isn’t visible until 100 chapters later. I fully understand Akira’s motives and desires; he’s very old, has been through a lot, and doesn’t just fall in love like that. But at times, he seems almost too cold toward them, and that starts to get on my nerves. Also, I want to point out that there’s been way too much Gojo in the latest chapters. Obviously, you want to show his friendship with Akira, but he’s in almost every scene with the main character, and he’s stealing the spotlight. I’ll go even further and say that the development of Akira’s relationship with Gojo is portrayed better than his relationships with the girls around him. I wouldn’t dare tell you how to write your own work – I really like it. But I couldn’t help but share my thoughts on the plot. I apologize in advance if my words came across as harsh.

Can you write more about Toga? There hasn't been a chapter about her for a while.

The author is too eager to develop the characters' relationship, which, for me personally, makes the whole romance seem rather fake.

I hope there won't be any yuri in this story, because the interaction between Utaha and Eriri is a little alarming. And Miyuki doesn't improve the situation at all. Mr. Translator, could you please answer whether there will be any yuri in the future?

Dear author, I like your work, you write good stories. However, I want to say that you should stop starting new stories. It's understandable when you're working on two or three fanfics at the same time, but you already have almost five works in progress. This approach may scare off potential readers and, moreover, places a heavy burden on you.

I find it strange that he is surprised that it is possible to summon a servant with a seal. After all, even before that, when he first went to church with Kotomia, he discussed this possibility with Edmond.

I'm glad you're leaving.