Helping my story along the way :P. Others are just words i am using allow me to fill this review up. Also just FYI, the story's good I am pretty sure you will enjoy it. The characters have got grit, they dont give up and work hard. I tried to keep the story as grounded from MC's perspective. Would like it if you guy could comment anything you like or any character you would like to keep and along those line

Thanks for the review