That, and the shoehorned romance so that the lemons is sped up for the sake of doing the scenes faster… I hate them. So far, the only explicit scene that describe something sexual is at [Chapter 004 : What It Takes To Be A Braver], though they are minor and is just a form of skinship bonding of the opposite sex. Just giving you a heads up regarding this one fan service.

Yeah, but it really is a shame that some emotional moments might be feeling more shallow because of this.

One who got his ideologies, belief and morality destroyed from the fact that he's still alive and alone from his close acquaintances? Bear with it, please, since even soldiers even if they're hardened and cold-blooded, they're human too afterall.

Not so sure about that, both will be married to wives of their own.

Don't mention it, just brace yourself for the time skips similar to the adaptations alongside some slower-paced slice-of-life bonding moments

[Rudy X Roxy] Like the original, yes, as Eynor hasn't rediscovered the feeling that Rudeus is currently experiencing as of this time, Love.

These Greyrats have Light brown, including both Zenith and Paul too, but bare with it as I'm going with visual progression with how varied POV and Eynor / Linap's perspective describes them as such. When Volume 1 happens, possibly after I put this on hiatus, ending it the same way both Novels did, when we come to see them again, familiar ones will be described again albeit differently.

Unfortunately, the few early chapters will set him up as having the capabilities of being able to learn both Magic and Swordsmanship, and so until the moment for when he meets a Mentor that is proficient in Archeries and the time he'll spend with that person comes, I hope that you bare with it. But yes, the MC will prioritize Long Distance Arts of Bows over Magic, Close Range Arts of Martial Arts (possibly named as Techniques in the Six-faced world) over Swordsmanship. And while he is capable on all-fronts, they're not without their own downsides, so expect events of causalities.

Also, it's because it's emphasized to put your attention to what's what in certain situations, especially when it's all BIG.

Yes, since I don't want the readers getting confused on what line they should take a few breaks in between the others, and stylistically just experimenting like any other novels you saw in, well, everywhere. So expect different kinds of results from Rifujin's original work, both WN and LN and also the Anime, as of the moment.

Suit yourself, man, it's just a Fanfic for most people, anyway. And there are few circumstances on why he hadn't shown his emotions yet, and I'm saving it for a later occasion when he can't bottle it up anymore. Ah well, No Harm, No Foul.

Well, each person describes the thing they want to convey in their own words, and despite seeing the same thing, they may not view it as so.

No, though he'll lash it out on someone else unrelated to his death.

I'm still having a hard time regarding the placement of grammars and verbs that isn't fit on some sentences. By the way, the setting will have some lowkey Sci-fi elements and Contemporaries, a.k.a Near-Future Isekai so no Space-Travelling or the likes... Yet. I'm having some ideas as to have the other Continents and Realms in the world to have distinct mythologies, like a Mediterranean or Middle-Eastern vibe to one of the found continents of Altaris. That's that, and i appreciate for the kind words!

Ah, pardon. By that it's about the possibilities IF Mangaka or Drawers decides to pick their 'Pen' and make some artwork inspired by these in general and with the settings and atmosphere you're having Just in the Prologue, it might make for a Bloodborne-esque vibe novel, and i'm All down for it.

It's the prologue and things are quite intense already. I don't really get what's things supposed to be or what action is partaking on some scene, like my brain got lost when people speedrun about their life's accomplishes. If the world's that red colored, i wonder what it'd look like if someone decided to pick their pen? Characters background's a little too much ambiguous, but there's room for having some spill out a little far down the line so if written comprehensively, it might make them more believable.

Would be more appreciated if there were to be some criticism or certain topic you'd pick like style of writing, story-pacing or settings but i'll take your compliments for it.

Thanks for describing my shortcomings with your honesty. I'll be sure to learn for the upcoming chapters and when i were to revise Volume in the near future.

Reminds me of Sekiro's opening, somewhat.

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