Neocrates
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Author here! Finally, I was able to materialize the story that started off as a daydream! I hope you'll give this story a chance and maybe spend a few good minutes to give it a read. Thank you! If you have questions, you can drop them here.
idiot to the extreme
i dont that's what just happened...
Klaus has officially become the Filler-generator of this book like he could say anything unecessary to make the chapters longer but still feel so shallow. Most of the time he's spouting provocation. not a hint of some character development, still the same as he is back in Azure continent
you reap what you sow
he seems like an idiot with little to no character development. the author could've added some more depth into his character but seeing how he is now, i think he'll stay this way till the end.
this kind of pride and arrogance makes me hate her HAHAAHAH
it's annoying how a chapter would end halfway of the conversation or scene just for the sake of having a cliffhanger. Constantly ending every chapter this way just beats the purpose of maintaining the thrill and anticipation, but rather, it only induces unsatisfactory and poor writing.
downside of having too many elements, Grey's taking a lot of time condensing and mastering each of his elements despite having been on the same elemental grade as Klaus (theoritically)
since they're stronger, they're much more resistant to their weakness especially if it's from someone weaker than them
yet Void was the real strongest member of the group đ
foreshadowing Grey's love interest??
Lucas is getting revenge to his son just because his father dots on his grandson HAHAHAHAHAHAHA I know where Grey's pettiness came from