lectar

Bro iread u til 200+, what I can say is although the book seems great…with many attepts of worldbuilding and lore and attempts of putting questions…to me the book is down bad due to this. Author just put some promises some random like reaally really random things suddeny and hope we feel like ‘wow what will happened next?’ The plot is literallt not going anywhere as the chapters just full of info dumps and lack luster conversation and weak reasoning of what’s happening. Idk man, although the mc looks and written as a great genius or something, he’s act around some realy random thing is too unbecoming. I’ll drop this bcs the story seems to be just eluding from going through the plot and author just give out empty promises.

But this is the first time the zetsu even shows any malice, right? The first time he saw zetsu, zetsu just go rouge. Plus, mayfly is too broken!

Thanks amomon-san

Dem, author-san! All of your fan-fic got a that kind of spark behind it man!

Wow, quite an idea u have there! Hope to see it blossom on your hand author-san!