Such sloppy writing, should just stop

Hate when people make there characters act pathetic and weak, bugs me too much and makes no sense, since he could act normal and get the same result probably better

Yes, they’re ranked at EX rank but he can only use them to the rank his parameters, so they’re basically sealed to F-Rank until all his stats level up

Thank you for the review, I intend to take full advantage of the DxD world and it’s characters as well as the Fate system with the servants, it won’t be like other ones where they will summon countless servants and grow too powerful to quickly, I’ m looking at only 5 summoned servants that are all relevant tp the story and legends of england

Should just post it in here asshe

Saber

vou extrair as engrenagens sagradas de alguns e colocá-los nos melhores cavaleiros sagrados *hope that makes sense, used Google translate*

I was originally going to make him do that but England offers nothing to him, so he’ll fight against the old Satan faction and khaos brigade etc, I might make some greedy devil families his enemies I’m not sure yet, next chapters will have timeskips to make better work

No Merlin used magic to make it like a pocket dimension, it’s like dimensional gap where ophis lives, only difference is that it’s connected Arthur’s soul and grows alongside him

Its saber class

The dimensional space that he is in right now will grow as he grows due to the territory being linked to his soul, so as it grows more resources will be available as well as the system rewards too

And it is 13 years before the start of the canon, give the mc plenty of time to grow himself and his kingdom and people

It will start out as a small village, and progressively get bigger to thing like a town then a city etc till it is a kingdom, once it reaches kingdom state it will have individual cities around its area, therefore making it a nation around the size of England

I’m only doing 10 for today, since it’s a Sunday I’ll be looking to do a chapter either everyday or every other day

Thanks for the feedback, it’s my first time writing, anymore feedback is always welcome as well as how the story should progress, hoping to get at least the first 10 chapters out today

COVID ain’t no excuse