Yeah, the first chapters are a little crapy, as just like you said, I didn't have an outline and it was indeed a draft. I would probably have changed a lot of things. I think that it getting better, but hey I'm doing this to practice. What I don’t agree with is the incest. I'm sure that there was nothing close to incest, you can have brotherly love without being incest. At least, in my country families are really affectionate with each other. Anyway, thanks for the criticism, it helps me a lot when readers comment.

IDK, I kinda have a lot of bands already. BUT we can make them play at a music festival? I was thinking of signing cool bands with the mc future music label, so maybe they could be part of it too. I didn't know the band, Thanks for the recommendation 👌

Thanks, man I really appreciate it. I already wrote 30 chapters, they only need editing, so you at least will have 50 chapters hahaha.

Just parts. No Ghouls.

I copy the name from the wiki 💁💁

I look into it, from what I read he could do that breathing style because he had a special ear, right? Anyway, it didn't go with the mc style.

These rules and powers had been changed. To see the new one go to the auxiliary chapter.

I have like a full album just for her 😤😤😤

Latino with Italian grandparents. Went to culinary school and learn bad French. And worked in America for like two years 💁💁. My cultural ways are really over the place at the moment lol.

And he will get roasted for that. A lot...

😂😂😂

King crimson are the gods. I still remember the live concern with the two drums sets. Amazing.

Is funny because PP means Pianissimo in music.

Lol

I don't know 🧐. Google doesn't change it or Grammarly.

That would be a really great story.

After this little drama, there is a small-time skip. And he will use it. I have too much work this week so you’ll need to wait for a little.

I don’t think it will bring porblmes. Almost Mori would become friends with him and the grandpa would feel curious. They are not bad guys after all.

My mc doesn't want to be a celebrity he wants to play music Live, not the same. Plus if you didn't know, celebrities are more often than not really sexually open-minded and the person that you see in interviews are characters. My mc is a lover of the woman's body, he wants to be a fashion designer. If you want an mc that only sees a woman as a hole for lust then you should drop this novel fast. In this novel, there are friendships, apologies, mistakes and real-life things. I swear the words Simp and Beta should be banned from the Internet. I weigh 100 Kilos, look like a child trafficker and do kickboxing. And also like embroidery, cooking, flower arrangements and cry watching animated movies. Not being an ass to people around you doesn’t make you a 'beta'.

from Avicii?