Beat_Man

Writing* (I really enjoy Writing)

I understand, I will try

Enjoy the read but don’t expect much.

Honestly, I just put it in the chapter just as a build up, so if you where bored about the romance with Tsunade and Yuzuriha then my bad, don’t worry though you won’t see much of it later on, and it won’t be the main part of the chapters later on. Like next chapter for example, the MC’s mother and Tsunade’s relationship only get brought up in the beginning, afterwards it gets back on track with the story. Although I agree it could have been a side story but whatever, it is what it is.

>:)

Chapter 8, skeleton form:

I agree with you, it will be weird if I do it as expected, but I’m going to make this more interesting with extra spicy drama. But that will be like far later in the story…. But maybe sooner then expected….

Yea my bad on that one, when I first started writing this I was inspired by other books and in one of them I saw them using the love hearts. So I saw it as unique and wanted to try it, but after getting multiple people to complain about them made me reconsider, but don’t worry the hearts are only in the first chapter and I will edit it out soon, thanks for the review.

I made this, don’t know if it loaded last time.