I don't know how many times I have read this, but it never fails to Crack me up.

I really liked it, although I thought there were possibly too many tales. I wanted to get to the ending faster. I might have skipped one or so. great ending, though.

I like that the main male character isn't abusive to his woman. Only the bad guys are abusive.

Very intense and I look forward to Talia bringing the guardians down, destroying them.

wrung

Alex in Wonderland?

I do love it when Karma comes calling.

Now that Ana won't he believed. George can say that he decided to mate with Dawn and Zina is Owen's fated mate.

I know... it's a cliffhanger, but rest assured that Book 2 will be coming put at the beginning of 2023.

I have a suspicion that Alexio will be her mate once she comes of age. This assumption is based on his over protectiveness, how he reacts to her, and that he hasn't found his mate. Almost sounds like grooming, but it isnt, as it doesn't appear to be deliberate on his part.

Gantry = gently?

Have just added this bonus back chapter.

Hmmm. Still suspicious about those German boys.

I'm more worried about Rika and the other girl. It seems obvious that the German boys are probably part of this group.

I like the story but the frequent spelling mistakes, the grammatical errors and the changing between past tense and present tense really do my head in.

It has the potential to be a good story, but the tense changes in the middle of sentences are doing my head it. Please, author, run it through Grammarly first.

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I love the story, but the swapping back and forwards between present and past tense is doing my head in. Would have been better written in past tense.

I am enjoying it. Some spelling/grammar checking on homonyms would be good, but otherwise well-written...................................................

I loved the story, but there were many grammatical and spelling errors, so it was hard to read. If it was rewritten with correct tenses, it would be an amazing story.