Andy_Torres_2396

You don't talk as if it were inevitable, it's fiction, don't be such an idiot. Well, what can you expect from someone who made his protagonist be deceived...

Does such a stupid explanation really convince you? Ha ha ha

What a bunch of nonsense did you just read? Hahaha It is not only a sector of readers who do not like to read ntr but the majority. Also, what does it have to do that you have to write according to your artistic shit inspiration or something with writing an NTR? Now that's why deceptions and infidelities have to be written about the protagonist? Why is it the protagonist that this happens to? Obviously writing has an intention, you are not obliged to write such things so you just write it because you want to. You felt like writing about a protagonist being deceived. And again, many are not punished in reality but many others are, if you in fiction don't do it it's because you don't feel like it and you just want to continue with that strange strange fetish.

It is very well written and with a quite interesting plot. One question is, is it a novel that you wrote or is it a translation? Thank you very much, I would really like to continue reading it, you do a good job👌👌

Haha he met someone randomly and just because he gave her food he already decided to save her? 🤦🤦🤦I hate this type of MC

That is, you can create a kind personality without needing to show a person giving something to a person in need. That would be the simplest and smallest thing to represent the goodness of a character. To show that a character is very familiar or loves his family, it would be boring to describe or construct dialogues full of love and that they are united because it is tiring, as happens with the fast and the furious. You can show a trait but hide it or bring it out in situations that really show it. Let it not be so monothematic, always being familiar or sweet because it is not very realistic nor does it show the value of those traits and behaviors.

I don't understand the need to write in such a sweet way, constantly mentioning that they support him and in a warm voice and that they encourage him, that becomes annoying. Not the fact itself but the repeated form is what paradoxically makes it look superficial. However, I really like the premise of the story and how it unfolds. Although I would like it not to be so melodramatic and also for Ethan to show more character or some particularity in his person. I say this because it is difficult to root for characters who just follow the wave. There is a way to show the MC's personality or if he feels affection or his values ​​without having to appear so "warm", understanding or open...

An important fact to re-emphasize is that you may like things or not follow their reasons or consequences. What I was saying is not supported by anything, I said that man does not like polygamous relationships precisely because of how society (us) evolves, also because of the inherent problems that polygamous relationships imply. Which means that when you don't like polygamous relationships it is necessarily because of their problems. And you can't say that you like polygamous relationships if it weren't for the problems because it would have to stop being polygamous relationships since its problems are the natural fact in itself of polygamous relationships over monogamous relationships.

Let's see, I used examples linked to the cause and I even told you that the consequences and problems are inherent to the fact in polygamous relationships. You are using a fallacy of example and association. Here we are talking from the perspective that someone does not like something because of its causes and consequences, that is why I said that someone cannot like to eat a lot because it can make them gain weight. Not the other way around. That is for even those examples that, as you see, are not necessarily inherent issues like your example of hamburgers, but as I said, what I said is already something inherent to the cause. Furthermore, someone cannot precisely like eating hamburgers because it can make them gain weight, it is not the same as liking hamburgers. I may like to eat vegetables because they improve my condition but I may not like vegetables. The fact is that you may or may not like something for reasons. That's for non-inherent causes. Now with polygamous relationships, if you remove the problem of polygamous relationships, they would have to stop being polygamous. Polygamous relationships are the problem and the consequence of monogamous relationships. Its consequences are inherent.

Ntr🖕🖕🖕wtf and there are too way unnecessary descriptions... The autor must be crazy. Who would be so stupid to make his MC ntred???? 😡🤦🤦