Az_Tempest
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He stated that since he was the most handsome boy in the continent, it was only natural that he be paired up with a girl that had the beauty to topple nations. Also, he was not optimistic about Rebecca's growth in her chest area. - Az_Tempest12dCommented
good job
He then wrote a letter saying that he didn't agree to the arranged marriage that was made between his gramps and Rebecca's grandfather. The reason he gave for the cancellation of the marriage agreement was due to Rebecca being not good enough for him. - Az_Tempest12dCommented
tooo overpower3d
William's body shuddered in ecstacy. His breathing had now become ragged, as if he was about to faint anytime due to exhaustion. - Az_Tempest12dCommented
+1 point (7.5/10)
"Twenty thousand gold coins? It's that expensive?" William held the staff in his hands to have it appraised. - Az_Tempest12dCommented
glad he is not ridiculing a child good job mc
"Twenty thousand gold coins? It's that expensive?" William held the staff in his hands to have it appraised. - Az_Tempest12dCommented
she isn't even her disciple yet and she is also and adult -8.5 points (1.5/10) masters points not mc's
She was planning to take Rebecca to the Misty Sect to start her training, but postponed it when she discovered that she was engaged to a country bumpkin. As an elder of the prestigious sect, she wouldn't allow her disciple to have any kind attachment to a nobody. - Az_Tempest12dCommented
liked the negotiation great comeback but a10 year old negotiating +2 points. -1.5 points (6/10)
"You want me to break the marriage agreement for a pill that is only worth two thousand gold coins?" William asked in a mocking tone. He then glanced at Rebecca and grinned. "In your Master's eyes, you are only worth two thousand gold coins." - Az_Tempest12dCommented
Issei gift just for putting it there well done for the reference +2 points (5.5/10)
Rebecca, on the other hand, looked at William with amusement. She didn't really care about the marriage agreement and didn't think much of her fiance. However, the more she looked at William, the more pleasing he became in her eyes. - Az_Tempest12dCommented
you are
"Gold? I'm not interested in gold," William replied. "Do you think we are poor?" - Az_Tempest12dCommented
I see where this is going well done - +1.5 points (3.6/10)
"What I mean is, have you prepared your compensation?" William smiled. "Since you are planning to break the marriage agreement, you should have brought a suitable compensation to make us agree to your demand, right?" - Az_Tempest12dCommented
a child doing negotiation -0.2 , -0.2 (2.1/10) Note at 0 this novel is garbage
Agatha was starting to feel that the filthy boy in front of her was not as simple as he seemed. His mannerisms, and the way he acted, made her feel that this marriage agreement wasn't a big deal to him. - Az_Tempest12dCommented
perfect cultivation novel cliche - 0.2 points. (2.5/10)
"Allow me to answer your question," Eleanor replied. "Rebecca is a genius. A genius that is only born once every two hundred years. As her Master, I can't allow my disciple to marry a nobody." - Az_Tempest12dCommented
does he realise he is a child when he said this -0.5 points (2.7/10)
"Don't worry gramps, I'll handle this," William said with a smile. "Just calm down. I don't want you to get a heart-attack. It's just not worth it. Aunt, can you bring grandpa to his room. I'll take care of our guests for the time being." - Az_Tempest12dCommented
Grandpa -6 from common sense but he is now (7.7/10)
"Hospitality?" James sneered. "A sl*t like you and that bastard better wash your necks. You want me to come to your Dutchy? Fine, I will bring the Red Plague along with me when I visit. I want to see just how the two of you are planning to give me your hospitality!" - Az_Tempest12dCommented
Cliche author but mc gained some plot +0.2 (3.2/10) Mc rating
"Since you are already here, let us get right down to business," Agatha said in a mocking tone. "We came here to break the marriage agreement between my daughter and this unworthy boy who is covered in filth!" - Az_Tempest12dCommented
cliche
"Since you are already here, let us get right down to business," Agatha said in a mocking tone. "We came here to break the marriage agreement between my daughter and this unworthy boy who is covered in filth!" - Az_Tempest12dCommented
spoken true to his heart
William found Rebecca to his liking and gave the young girl two thumbs up in his heart. The boy knew that, in a few more years, this little doll would grow up to be an outstanding beauty. Marrying someone like her wouldn't be a bad idea, as far as William was concerned. - Az_Tempest12dCommented
more like in doubt
Because he had just come from the pasture, William's clothes were dirty. His face was dusty and his red hair was a mess. Even so, his green eyes--that were as clear as emeralds--made the little doll, Rebecca, raise an eyebrow in acknowledgement. - Az_Tempest12dCommented
oh he was trying to boost the mood good job - (3/10) successfully gained 1 point . note this novel is popular so won't drop until this is zero
"Hahaha! As expected of my Grandson!" James clapped his hands. The anger that he had been bottling up completely evaporated into thin air as his eyes turned into crescents. "Worthy of being an Ainsworth!"