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Kansas_Day

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  • Kansas_Day
    Kansas_Day2yr
    Commented

    Riley name meaning: valiant

    Riley Romero awoke to the sound of his alarm clock. He was lying on the bed, his neck and arms bent at an uncomfortable angle.
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    The Expandables - A Post-Apocalypse Cyberpunk Adventure
    Sci-fi · ImBloo
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  • Kansas_Day
    Kansas_Day2yr
    Commented

    Ivanka name meaning: God is gracious

    "Morning brother, time for breakfast!" Said a singsong voice. It was his 12-year old sister, Ivanka.
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    The Expandables - A Post-Apocalypse Cyberpunk Adventure
    Sci-fi · ImBloo
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  • Kansas_Day
    Kansas_Day2yr
    Commented

    This is so cool! I already love it!

    Ch -1 Prologue
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    The Expandables - A Post-Apocalypse Cyberpunk Adventure
    Sci-fi · ImBloo
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  • Kansas_Day
    Kansas_Day2yr
    Commented

    ✨ politics ✨

    As the First Council members succumbed to old age one by one, they were replaced with the younger generation. Before long, each person began to have their own vision for the future. They picked sides and they quarreled. Arguments became conflicts. Then came the assassinations and the riots. For a while, it seemed that humanity's fate was sealed with Arcology-1 as well.
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    The Expandables - A Post-Apocalypse Cyberpunk Adventure
    Sci-fi · ImBloo
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  • Kansas_Day
    Kansas_Day2yr
    Replied to IPreferLonerMc

    There are probably a few smaller countries that don't know about it

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    Post-Apocalypse - The Manifestation of Endless Carnage
    Sci-fi · ColdHeavens
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  • Kansas_Day
    Kansas_Day2yr
    Commented

    I'm pretty sure everyone already knows.

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    Post-Apocalypse - The Manifestation of Endless Carnage
    Sci-fi · ColdHeavens
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  • Kansas_Day
    Kansas_Day2yr
    Commented

    As per expected

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    Post-Apocalypse - The Manifestation of Endless Carnage
    Sci-fi · ColdHeavens
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  • Kansas_Day
    Kansas_Day2yr
    Replied to Brezer

    English isn't their first language, give them a break. They're doing pretty good thus far.

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    Post-Apocalypse - The Manifestation of Endless Carnage
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  • Kansas_Day
    Kansas_Day2yr
    Commented

    I guess they're going out like the dinosaurs.

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    Post-Apocalypse - The Manifestation of Endless Carnage
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  • Kansas_Day
    Kansas_Day2yr
    Commented

    Kinda weird but ok.

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    Post-Apocalypse - The Manifestation of Endless Carnage
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  • Kansas_Day
    Kansas_Day2yr
    Commented

    Oop, I already see drama.

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    Post-Apocalypse - The Manifestation of Endless Carnage
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  • Kansas_Day
    Kansas_Day2yr
    Commented

    Great hook!

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    Post-Apocalypse - The Manifestation of Endless Carnage
    Sci-fi · ColdHeavens
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  • Kansas_Day
    Kansas_Day2yr
    Commented

    Remember to write everything in past-tense, after you read it its already in the past.

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    Post-Apocalypse - The Manifestation of Endless Carnage
    Sci-fi · ColdHeavens
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  • Kansas_Day
    Kansas_Day2yr
    Posted

    Honestly, this is a good story. It has a lot of potential, and I already am in love with the characters! The only problem is that the writer needs some more practice, but everything else is great!

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    Post-apocalyptic hunter
    Urban · Arc_Yakamura
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  • Kansas_Day
    Kansas_Day2yr
    Commented

    Unless Jeanne see's how weak he is and thinks that he'll just be dead weight.

    And If he'll be able to recruit her to the group that he will make, it will lessen his burden in the future, so it's a very great chance for a famous person like her to owe him there are no drawbacks to his plans either.
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    Post-apocalyptic hunter
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  • Kansas_Day
    Kansas_Day2yr
    Commented

    Not Jeanne the Queen?

    From all the luck in the world, the girl was the one he didn't notice earlier because she was still young, The Knight Awakener Jeanne was a famous awakener back in the apocalypse with her ability she was able to hold back a thousand mutated zombies alone. She was hail as the strongest shield of humanity and her most famous nickname is the ' Fortress Knight Jeanne'.
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    Post-apocalyptic hunter
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  • Kansas_Day
    Kansas_Day2yr
    Commented

    Lol, she must be used to this then.

    " I'm sorry but I need to go." The girl politely declined she seems to be in a hurry and don't want to waste time with the thugs.
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    Post-apocalyptic hunter
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  • Kansas_Day
    Kansas_Day2yr
    Commented

    eugh, gross.

    " Little lady want to come with us we will take for a good time." a mohawk thug was licking his lips looking at the girl.
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    Post-apocalyptic hunter
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  • Kansas_Day
    Kansas_Day2yr
    Replied to Kansas_Day

    Nevermind. Just found that it says the end of November, not the end of the day. Though I do think that it would be more interesting if the deadline were closer.

    Well, there's nothing you can't buy online this is the great power of the internet that even the greatest awakened people can't do, Tristan ordered a custom-made sword he will do the sharpening himself it just needs to be durable. then go find an offroad car later and go to an arms dealer that he knows.
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    Post-apocalyptic hunter
    Urban · Arc_Yakamura
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  • Kansas_Day
    Kansas_Day2yr
    Commented

    Glad he got a good weapon, but won't online purchases be useless? They usually arrive after a couple of days, especially custom-made purchases. And before he said that the apocalypse is arriving tomorrow. Lets hope that the postman isn't eaten.

    Well, there's nothing you can't buy online this is the great power of the internet that even the greatest awakened people can't do, Tristan ordered a custom-made sword he will do the sharpening himself it just needs to be durable. then go find an offroad car later and go to an arms dealer that he knows.
    altalt
    Post-apocalyptic hunter
    Urban · Arc_Yakamura
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