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I started reading this for fps, so far the story is great. I'm honestly not that into BL but I don't mind continuing with this book.

I love Su Tang... I am dying of laughter here... he is like a loaded automatic gun. Anyone can get hit, it has no eyes.

I like the story and will keep reading it. so far the build up was slow and is now picking up pace. i like the characters and the general direction of the story line.

ah Ms Han... she is the type to keep making things difficult until she gets her way.

"That's because our Yaoyao has a good master like you"

why substitute master with husband? it's confusing

I like the plot very much so it pains me to say that the grammar needs a lot of work. Its sad cause I am reading this because I loved the the authors other stories. I also know that this may have been a direct translation issue. I wish it was better edited. Important to note are the gender flexible characters, overly repeated words and direct translation of Proverbs that lose meaning. Finally statements that place adjectives incorrectly. Just a few changes to this will make a difference to the great story. I hope to see even more of the authors work. Thank you for sharing your writing.

I this avaliable in English. I like the art style and think it looks like a great read. just can read what they are saying. if there is an English translation please help me with the name so I can read it.

I love it please let it pass I have been praying 🙏 so much. The characters are all well written even the story keeps one wanting more. Keep up the good work

this I'd a gender salad, please I like the story go back and edit this. great writers learn from mistakes and aim to improve their work. we want to see this world through your eyes. keep writing. [img=recommend]