Cain_2423

What happened to the good old "OBLIVIATE" and being done with it? Could save us from a lot of this drama. (Just my opinion, not a critique.)

Actually just noticed that whenever Third POV is being used by OC or any other characters the pronoun thing shows up. You've done a great job, I hope the next chapters you release take this into consideration. What's happened in these earlier chapters can be edited later if you want. 👍🏼👍🏼

Great FanFic. Would definitely recommend.

I've read like 25 Chapters till now. It's great. The only thing that gets on my nerves is when referring to the OC, the use of "they/their". Bro just use singular pronouns so it's easier to track (for me, don't know about anybody else), like sunny in chapter 26 when referring to him uses they or their, it just feels weird to me. Other than that, 10/10

Soooooo, when would there be an update? Or is this it? Hope not, cause I kinda like this anime.

"Wholesale Heavily Discounted Kakashi". 😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣 I'm Sold. This gon be gud.

When I read the "Gollum" part, in my mind:

This?...

Great Novel in my perspective, just the Writing Quality is bad. I mean some of the characters names and pronouns change every couple of paragraphs. It's irritating but manageable. Overall it's good.