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Daoist2BauLK

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  • Daoist2BauLK
    Daoist2BauLK1yr
    Commented

    Instead of third person narration ,I would prefer this . I can imagine myself as Helen if the writting style is this .[img=update]

    Ch 34 The carriage man's story
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    Fantasy · helenar
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  • Daoist2BauLK
    Daoist2BauLK1yr
    Commented

    a spoiler !?

    maybe a sunshine warmth male lead will be good 🧐 someone whose smile is brighter than the sun ... hair shines like the bright red sun ... eyes deep as ocean ..❤️‍🩹
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    Fantasy · helenar
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  • Daoist2BauLK
    Daoist2BauLK1yr
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    I like how the story started developing and the chapters are longer now 🔥

    i would gladly accept your suggestion, criticisms and appreciation. 👩‍💻
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    Fantasy · helenar
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  • Daoist2BauLK
    Daoist2BauLK1yr
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    Helen's smooth skin was covered with water droplets . Her shiny hair had water dripping down like morning dew drops. She looked like a goddess of the moon . Filled with elegance and beauty ....goddess Selene...
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    Fantasy · helenar
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  • Daoist2BauLK
    Daoist2BauLK1yr
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    the rice was rich with flavour and spices .. it had a bit of tangy taste with perfect spices .. Helen's eyes glittered..
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    Fantasy · helenar
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  • Daoist2BauLK
    Daoist2BauLK1yr
    Commented

    so now , there are any? is any hidden character a magician [img=thinking]

    The magicians were once all around this continent... they were equal to elementalist ..
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    Fantasy · helenar
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  • Daoist2BauLK
    Daoist2BauLK1yr
    Commented

    ohhhh..so maybe the lost daughter is Helen's mother 🤔 then the granny is her grandma 😯

    Ch 28 unknown language
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    Fantasy · helenar
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  • Daoist2BauLK
    Daoist2BauLK1yr
    Commented

    i wanna know who is the ml 😭 lusav or brake?

    Ch 23 Worst Enemy
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    Fantasy · helenar
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  • Daoist2BauLK
    Daoist2BauLK1yr
    Commented

    ohhh they meet 😍

    Ch 21 Captivating killing beauty
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    Fantasy · helenar
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  • Daoist2BauLK
    Daoist2BauLK1yr
    Commented

    ohooo love is budding 🤭✨

    Ch 13 Akinar Petra
    The runaway princess and wicked prince
    Fantasy · helenar
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  • Daoist2BauLK
    Daoist2BauLK1yr
    Commented

    ohooo who is suspected ? i didnt understand any reason to kill that person!!

    Ch 16 How was the body?
    The runaway princess and wicked prince
    Fantasy · helenar
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  • Daoist2BauLK
    Daoist2BauLK1yr
    Replied to DaoistFsH6Sm

    isn't that the reason why he is a jerk 😤 He is such an idiot .I worry about the future of nation .😗

    " dont think, i will see you differently or start loving you just because you try playing cat and mouse !. i wont love you ever , my only lover is Clivat " the Crown Prince shouted .
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    Fantasy · helenar
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  • Daoist2BauLK
    Daoist2BauLK1yr
    Posted

    the plots are unfolding slowely ,but iits interesting that there are so many mysterious situations who is the poisoner ? what is lusavs identity ? helens mom?🤔🤔i am more interested

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    Fantasy · helenar
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