thankz mate for this feedback and giving this book a chance. I just hope you will continue to like the story as you read along.😊😁 Feel free to drop comments once in a while.

nice start... Intriguing as to how the MC ended up in that island/place

thank you. I hope you will continue to enjoy the story.

Thank you so much for this amazing review

thank you 😁

The story has a refreshing start. After reading the early chaps, I could feel the mystery vibe of the story. Exciting and Thrilling!😁 The conversation between the characters are well-written. (just be mindful of few punctuation marks and capitalization of letters). all in all, the story is nice. So keep it up! looking forward to more exciting moments between the MCs.

oh yeah, I agree 😆🤣 You have a point there, mate!

Hi author is here 😆 Please bear with me as this is my first time writing a book. Your feedback will be a great help to improve my writing so please drop your honest comment and review. If you have any question about the book, comment here and I will try my best to answer it without giving spoiler. Thank you.

😆 No... because his Angelic System won't let him be a villain.

thank you for this review 😆

thanks mate😁

whoah, this is an amazing story! the MC having a system in a cultivation world. Looking forward to more exciting journey and adventure of our OP MC. The author did a great job in describing the world building. all in all, the author has excellent writing quality. Keep it up!

🤣🤣🤣 i was caught off guard by the 'grammatical error'

don't generalize coz this is your opinion only. not everyone. Feel free to go.thank you for taking the time reading the early chaps. 😊

thank you for the invitation😊