Lacks world building but it still had a start but the premise of the story is interesting from what the author said in the first chapter and it has a lot of potential with a good first main character but he kind of grew into power fast but the pacing can be fixed. Overall the book is good but has potential to become great

You just made my day

I'll fix that in the future. Thank you

how far did you read coz I'll agree about the first 2 chapters but just read more you see it improves

Please read in deeper I fix that mistake

thanks for the positive feedback and I'll be sure not to disappoint

I understand. Thank you and I'll show more detail