why did you stop updating this novel it was so good _____________________________________________________________________________________

no this a good novel keep up the good work

this good novel fun to read please keep up the good work ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

The spelling and grammar is fine, but everything about the story feels off. Here we have a 12th-dimensional eldritch god, and yet he's being treated like a mere pet. It's perplexing; the story has a promising concept, but the execution of the storytelling leaves much to be desired.

i understand but why make him a cat of all things and let him act like a pet i will change the rating to 3 stars later on

I love the story, but why did you have to stop two good fanfics and then just start another novel, like Unique Gamers Travels? Now, it takes longer for a new chapter to be added lately. Travels of the Daughter of God was enjoyable; it was more enjoyable than Unique Gamers Travels.

Yes and no. I would give a story 2 to 3 stars if it's one that I may not enjoy, but the overall story is good even if I don't like it. However, this story was rated 4.8 when I wrote this review. I found it disappointing; I had hoped the story would have more substance. It was boring and not worth the time spent reading. It felt like a waste of hours of my life.

The protagonist's apparent lack of control over their own fate raises questions about their role in the story, casting them more as a pawn than a central figure. Despite their awareness of Doflamingo's ruthlessness, their steadfast loyalty feels unrealistic and strains believability. While it's natural for characters to admire others, the protagonist's unwavering devotion to Doflamingo seems difficult to reconcile with their knowledge of his darker deeds. It's hard to fully immerse oneself in the story when such inconsistencies arise, leaving the reader feeling disconnected and frustrated. Overall, this aspect detracts from the novel's overall enjoyment and impact.

No one wants to read this garbage. If the protagonist wasn't a girl, that would be fine. You know, it feels like the story is only about the system and not the main character. This story is stupid and trash. Why did you have to stop writing your other book just to give us this trashy book? I don't understand how your brain works, author.

you know the universe is big like there is Ōtsutsuki Clan maybe other world why do you have to only focuse on the Naruto world ?

The story was generated by AI, making it unlikable and boring to read. There are too many words that don't convey much meaning, and it feels off. It seems like there isn't a single chapter written by a human.

The pacing of this story is incredibly fast, leaving little room for character development or attachment. The protagonist gains power too quickly, making the progression feel rushed and lacking in depth. Additionally, the narrative lacks detail, with events occurring abruptly without sufficient explanation or context. Overall, the story could benefit from a slower pace and more attention to character growth and world-building.

this is stupid

good >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

this a good novel _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

nice

"I understand your point, and I think you should rewrite this story or at least this chapter. Let's change it so that the protagonist can only gain powers from beings that are strong, not from mortals who have no power whatsoever. I don't mind an evil protagonist, but I have an issue with characters being evil just for the sake of it. I'm not trying to change your story, but I'm just saying that it has to make sense why he is evil.

That is incredibly foolish. Anyone with a functioning brain would find this concept absurd. The characters in DXD are not ignorant. Are you suggesting we reduce their intelligence to that of a toddler? There are gods who have lived for millions or even billions of years in DXD, and let's not forget about Big Red; as soon as the MC comes to the world, he will 100% come to kill him. Some of these gods possess the power to foresee the future. If they see the protagonist's actions leading to catastrophe, they would likely eliminate him without hesitation. However, I'm concerned that you will grant him plot armor, as is often the case with web novel authors. Regardless of how nonsensical his actions are, everything seems to conveniently go his way. This needs to make sense.

"Sigh, this story is going to be disappointing. I hope Saitama one-punches him. Being evil for the sake of being evil is stupid, and you know how power levels work. The stronger you get, the harder it is to gain power, and you have to try new ways to become powerful. Killing billions of people is stupid because it doesn't make you stronger. I don't care; I was enjoying it up to this chapter. I'm 100% sure people will not like this story.

This is stupid. Why does he have to destroy a whole world and kill up to 7 billion people, not to forget the supernatural world where there could be up to 50 billion supernaturals and humans in DxD just for him to get strong? and lets not forget about the billions of children he will kill for no reason so that he can become powerful, and it's the most stupid way to get power. Why doesn't he fight strong beings and find ways to get strong in the DxD world without messing up the world? I don't understand this logic. Though if he wants to get stats from killed things, he could fight only the evil and bad gods. This is going to be disappointing; I hope I'm wrong here