RJTWRITER
A first time writer who wishes to practice writing and tell good interesting stories.
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Yes and no. Its true that if you go off the stories involving the Burning Martian lore it was a psychological deterrent created by the Guardians if I am not mistaken. But many of the original stories had it as a physical, psychological, or a combination of the two. I base most of the lore of this story on the DC animated series and films which for the most part show it primarily as a physical weakness with the fear of the weakness being pronounced. Great question since you are partially right.
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One of the points raised by Lily and being stuck was that she was not able to be with her son. But we also know she was not super fond of James and perhaps was using him just for the bloodline. It is difficult to tell what kind of relation the two could have. I could see Lily wanting to use Harry for her own ends. But perhaps there is still a little maternity instinct there? It is hard to tell, the author has done a good job at making Lily and unknown. Random side thought, if Grindelwald dies. Will the dark choose a new champion in Voldemort or Neville? If Dumbledore dies, will the Light choose Neville or Lily? I worry that one way or another, the choosing of champions will doom Harry. And like with Morgana and Merlin, he will have to act like Mordred and put both down.
I think the author has given us a hint of what Harry could be in the story. The story of Merlin and Morgana ended with both their deaths but now we learned Mordred lived. Perhaps history is repeating itself with Harry being an essential peace of ending this war between light and dark. Something to keep in mind is that both Grindelwald and Dumbledore are bad mouthing Voldemort but I think the old boy might have a few tricks.
Lol, I am looking forward to it
This is a fascinating story. I love the character you are crafting with Failsafe. How interesting if the robot eventually decides to eliminate batman's opponents because it knows batman won't do what needs to be done, and in a twist also keeps its creator safe from crossing the line?
Jim is short for James, I probably should just change it to his nickname to prevent confusion.
Secret twist! lol
Someone put out the idea that Harry jumps in to help heal him. It is an interesting idea to one make Harry stand out positively for healing someone, though it could also be bad if he is question how he knows how to heal such wounds, exspecially if its a dark curse Neville flung. One way or another I do hope we get more of Cassius, could be a good ally for harry. Final thought is if he does die then Neville's reputation is either completely ruined or I call bs. It is one thing to argue in defense of Neville when he is flinging curses, it is completely another when he is flinging curses and kills someone who used light spells and stunning spells. Either Dumbledore realistically would need to cut his losses with the BWL or ruin his reputation completely which seems a little crazy.