mfoxxie_123

Your story has taken a unique perspetive on a widely written story line and I am enjoying reading and getting to know your characters .Keep up rge good work.

when are you coming back missing my favourite characters.

I really like the FL she is decisive about what she wants and going out to get it I like her style of waiting for the characters that harmed her to realize that she is no longer under her controll it's great.

thoughts

Why has Rachel turned into this kind ofperson she thinks of her self as perfect but hsr sister is rubbish nah I could realy do without hearing from her again she is taking up to much of the story and her touhjts are petty.

yes please check chapter for mistskes

Once a woman still feels the need to prove something to the man that hurt them they have not let go of him or the past . when you reach the stage of weather he ever sees you again or not matters not to you then you have let go . Only when you dont care.

Tell me where in the world today is holding hands cosidered intimate except for kids.

where was the father when all the abuse wad going .on

Good story dont get why she dies and goes back same place time as before guess it will be revealed later.