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rtsie_hkcgrmudo1yrPosted- rtsie_hkcgrmudo1yrCommentedCh 20 Chapter 20
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this eminence is so chill
"What a beautiful day we are having. Isn't it a great day for a walk?" - rtsie_hkcgrmudo1yrReplied to MihjkkankCh 1 Chapter 1
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i see.
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what's te difference?
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well well well
As he was walking the passage, he heard a tire screech. He turned around to see the truck going straight for him. The sudden impact knocked the air out of his lungs, and he fell back into the street. - rtsie_hkcgrmudo1yrCommented"You always complain about it, yet continue to read it."
- rtsie_hkcgrmudo1yrPosted
Writing Quality: Very humorous, Stability of Updates: good! i want more though! Story Development: not that slow, enough to introduce and tell at the right pace the struggle of the ML who is very human and relatable. Character Design: the characters are likeable and relatable. great job! World Background: the setting was simple as it focuses at the ML's problem and romances. Great work!
- rtsie_hkcgrmudo1yrCommentedCh 1 "Rich people really have loose screws."
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nice story !
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oh boy
This book has been deleted. - rtsie_hkcgrmudo2yrCommentedCh 10 "Your emerald eyes are too damn beautiful."
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lol i was right. he died!!
"D-duke?" Robert tapped Romero, who was still on Robert's shoulder. "P-please be fine." Robert started to tremble as he could not feel the duke's breathing anymore. He could feel the duke's body feeling lighter and warm liquid was slowly flowing out of it. - rtsie_hkcgrmudo2yrCommented
lol. such a baggage
Reflexively, Robert managed to carry the duke on his shoulder and avoid the destructive gust of wind. The wind was so sharp that it could split anything it passed through. - rtsie_hkcgrmudo2yrCommented
i bet this type of character will die first
Duke Esclamado is such a kind-hearted noble and always puts his people's safety first. The Duke was not a knight and most of the time he spent in his office, but after marrying Mila, he discovered his skill in Aura. The duke's heart, set to protect his people, was delighted that he had great power to do more for their people.