I see nothing wrong with this chapter. Description was on point, I'll continue reading.

There will be minimal romance. The MC was a playboy while he was in Britain [img=proud] How many chps have u read? Rate it.

I didn't even notice this here. No notification for it. So, about harem ...hmmm. It's in between.

Of course, as the Author of the book, I would give a biased review.[img=proud] To answer any of the questions piling up in your mind when you read or saw the synopsis/book cover. You have no choice, dear, you just have to read it.[img=Speechless] Because if you don't, the questions will disturb you and you won't be able to sleep. Now, would you like tossing around in bed just because you refused to read? No, right?[img=faceslap] Now, a little serious. I'm a new writer open to all respectful criticism but while you give the criticism, please note that I'm the author and your opinions will still be subjected to my reasoning first before I can decide whether to alter the story in any way. Alright, safe reading.

Interesting, but you need to correct some errors. Edit it to fit the usage of past tense in the beginning.

I love this. I'd be here for a while, I might get a coke or a better seat when you get contracted

This novel is exactly my go to for contemporary romance, the author sure knows her genre well. Also Congratulations on winning the wpc, sorry it came lateᕙ⁠(⁠⇀⁠‸⁠↼⁠‶⁠)⁠ᕗ

Sorry, that was an error. I've fixed it.

You are welcome.

I just wrote the synopsis there. I plan to write something there later, and I want it to be the first thing my readers will see, that's why I left out the first chp as a synopsis, for now.

I'm having a problem with reading for now, but I think your book should be great. I only wrote this review to advise you about your book cover, having a book cover will also aid in attracting readers. There are many ways to get a book cover now if you don't have the money to get a customized one, through Pinterest or AI generated. If you got a laptop, use Microsoft Bing with a good prompt of how you want your book cover to be but first start with "generate a picture for me" or you can search on Pinterest for a preferable book cover you'll like. If you are having a hard time getting this right, you can message me on discord 'debbie_06'. I'm only a writer trying to help out another writer because I've also been helped by other writers. Happy writing#

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After reading 12 chapters, I could finally give review about the novel. Overall, the writing quality is good, the grammar and punctuations..The story structure and development is going in a steady way and the characters design is portrayed nicely.I can say that the update stability is good to my own accord as the author post daily.Overall the book is good and it'll be great if you can give it a try if you are a fan of historical romance, cultivation and stuffs...

The writing quality is superb ,the paragraphs, grammar and spelling is correct ,lil to no mistakes . The story development is steady ,leaving us wanting to want more with each chp. The character design is portrayed nicely wanting us to have that favorite character and the love interest you want to support The update schedule is good .....and the world background is going in a steady way Overall ,the book has potential and will do more in the future .

This novel has potentials ,can't wait to read more chps, and dive more into the plot .

The plot is really good and I see potentials in the novel ,can't wait to dive more into it