Surya_Prakash_5810

I thought chu mo was the brother

the story is promising. but the translation to english names was not necessary. you could kept it as on the original. why is a boy named Bianca? also leo in one chapter is a girl and in the next chapter it's a boy. proof read before updating

adopted sister? really? use your brain man

I hate that kind of arch. please finish it off in 2 chapters

i think she will. come to you

sounds like a good ides

I knew it

I like that

now I want to see that