Nice

It's funny how I stop read this after 1 chapter only, man you shouldn't do that. That god part very insulting bro. you could create a fiction one or at least didn't mention any religion, but you do it and that's messed up.

The chapter is... Ight, keep going man.

Exactly, that's why I'm hope she was gonna see the truth from Orion Viewpoint, but still she having memory from nick/harry have to be make her more wise, because if it's not. Then i have no idea what author cooking :v

Anyway don't go too hard on Hermione, afterall she was just a victim.

Emperor haki? This should be interesting.

Wouldn't it be cool if Hermione also got to know the entire Harry Potter franchise from Orion's point of view? I hope you cook well dude.

CMIIW On movie, Harry didn't end up with Hermione wasn't it? (Tbc I didn't watch any HP movie at all) so doesn't that mean both of Nick/Harry and Orion timeline was alternative?

I hope Hermione became wise for this, because not only she have her own memory, she also had her (future version?) memory. And yeah, Orion deserved a buff, maybe zoltraak :v

I need another one :3

This is an honest and neutral rating. if you have problems with the world background rating, then remeber this was a fanfic. I don't need to comment much because the character development so far has been good. But to be honest, you using Deadpool's profile photo which is very ironic, because I'm pretty sure Deadpool would even consider Orion to be bullshit. Anyway, Hermione must penetrate the error. But don't overdo it, just make it simple and touching.

If you want to keep Nick alive, then the last fighting chapter really isn't necessary. You should have saved that for the climax of the saga, i suggest you to try different villain because Oc Vs Mc is already boring.

Ok, I want to comment a little on this fic. If there are sentence errors or bad grammar, That's because I use Google Translate. First of all I like how Orion's character has been portrayed so far. Even though there are many awkward things where he actually acts too naive even though he is called a gigachad several times lol. I hope the Author knows the consequences of the previous conflict, if Orion is still the same naive person (even when he's really grown up) after all that, then he's just trash. Honestly, I already had a guess that the traitor was Hermione and if I'm honest, this is a very good idea. Besides, I really never remember the special moment between MC and this woman, at least her betrayal would be her moment to remember. As for Rose and Daphne, both are quite good but need to be added more. Oh yeah, I hope Daphne's sister isn't a throwaway character, it would be great to see her in the future.

Add Cars franchise please.

This good

Please do The Incredible Arc as final arc.

I support you, please include SSJ4 in your DBZ fic.

Did this fic also gonna include Event of ASTV too?

Did someone have more fanfic genshin like this? I kind want to read something while waiting author-san to up this fic.

Look, I'm sorry if i make you mad. I didn't mean that and I only give suggestions, not orders. The decision is yours, once again I apologize if I was rude.