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Jose_Lugo_83737mthReplied to ridhibrata_dasHello, I'm fan of kingdom building/territory building novels... If you want to leave a deep impresion without risking too much with "romance plots", plots about your territory economy are great!!(definitely the best kingdom building novels), how you make a road to connect many towns, bring trade, make a quarry? a lumberjack or sawmill..., trade with silk, spices, you know what I mean?
- Jose_Lugo_83737mthReplied to ThyUnknownSaint
I'm too lazy to leave a good review, the novel it's ok...,
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Hola, como hablas español, te hare lo que ñara mi, podrias implementar. Por ejemplo, para hacer capitulos mas largos, puedes enfocarte en la economia y en los planes que tiene el mc, la construccion de carreteras y como llevara la economia de su territorio. Puedes tambien, dejar al lado el romance, es irrelevante si de kingdom building hablamos, el mc puede casarse y tener varias amantes no importa... Despues de todo, vivira bastante tiempo cierto? Asi le agregas algo "entretenido" mientras explicas economia(que para mi es lo entretenido de los kingdom building) Tambien, hacer un capitulo de que piensen porque estan ahi, como llegaron... Veo que lo aceptaron muy rapido, si hubieras hecho unos capitulos mencionando como discutian si era obra divina que los trabajo, si vieron lo mismo que el mc al teletransportarse a westeros, etc... Puedes ahi hacer al mc mas "unico" En cuanto a el efecto mariposa, puedes cambiar algunas cosas, como es una fanfic supongo que no deberias pero si estas practicando para hacer una novela mas adelante, te vendria bien intentarlo!! Me ha gustado mucho tu trabajo, hay muy pocos que puedan sacarle el potencial a los "kingdombuilding", es un tag incluso un genero, con mucho potencial... Puedes hacer cientos y cientos de capitulos sin quedarte sin imaginancion y todavia poder entretener al lector!! ANIMOS gracias oor darte el tiempo!
Ch 91 Taxes/Population/Income(auxiliar chapter) - Jose_Lugo_83737mthPosted
I really like thise type of novels, so...
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coal mines?
So yeah, Felipe quickly got his hands on resources from Venezuela to Chile. And unlike the Colombian Empire, the Kingdom of Peru had many Phosphorus Deposits where he could start industrializing matches factories. After all, his Empire also needs matches and bringing them from the states needs to be clarified. - Jose_Lugo_83737mthReplied to 4h0
the newsboys read in front of the people interest in news
From a country with approximately 840 thousand people before the war of independence, now of around 790 thousand, only a few thousand could read. And most that was able to read were in the war. - Jose_Lugo_83737mthCommented
Colombiaaaaaaaaa, grande la patria... y si es la Gran Colombia que es el mas profundo arrepentimiento de nuestros paises!
But this time is different. The gods might want it to happen that way, or God all might…, but 23 thousand men were now dead, decomposing in the hot ground of the Colombian Savana. - Jose_Lugo_83738mthPosted
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hopefully, the mc is a smart one... without a system to help, it can lead to a early death easily
Deleting all system abilities - Jose_Lugo_83731yrCommented
i agree with your logic, gentleman. Go ahead and try to get daenerys with the snake sisters... thnks
Knowing you are going to be gone for a long time and your hot blooded wife is going to be horny at some point and not caring if your other wife eats her out is vastly different than the two above examples. - Jose_Lugo_83731yrReplied to Daoist0Reaper
thanks
"Hey, that's my Kunai." - Jose_Lugo_83731yrCommented
ten or tens of times?
As long as one could cross the desert and reach the other end of the desert, they would be able to exchange their goods for ten times or even ten times the profits.detailLord Of The World: I Become The Lord Of The Desert From The StartSci-fi · Carp Blowing Bubbles - Jose_Lugo_83731yrCommented
just got goosebumps.. If you imagining a woman, singing the tragic song(like those in the movies) truthfully, awesome feeling!
Or not… and to tell the tale, no one will be left alive." - Jose_Lugo_83731yrCommented
Oh my god, I almost faint of cringe
YOU CANNOT CONTROL ME!!!