Thank you so much for your support. I will keep your suggestion in mind.

Girl, shouldn't you be saying something like a mart or something instead of a police station?

I really like this paragraph. Like is it really luck that you are the only one who survives while everyone that is important to you does not? Or are you actually unlucky?

Thank you so much for being the first reader to review my novel. It's nice knowing that there are actually people reading it. I sincerely apologize for the inconvenience. But I am thinking of deleting this novel and republishing it for contest #267. Please support my work, everything will be listed the same way as it is right now.

The story has potential, but there is just too much dialogue. There is a lack of world-building, the power phenomenon isn't explained clear yet.